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Her Way Of Wanting Us To Join In
Zayda walked to the pool.
She stripped down and smiled before diving.
She said the water's fine.
She stripped down and smiled before diving.
She said the water's fine.
Published 4th May 2024
Author's Note
This latest wordku poem happens to be about what one of a group of friends does to get the others to go along with a cool dip in the swimming pool.
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4th May 2024 8:53pm
the outfits are my vision write your way out of the maze little one I understand your indignation.
4th May 2024 9:21pm
4th May 2024 9:45pm
thank you for the memories and keys the sea of forgetfulness is abuzz with life.
4th May 2024 9:59pm
4th May 2024 11:15pm
you know our shared pain and shame plus pride is transforming us inside out as a family.
5th May 2024 1:54am
5th May 2024 2:19am
you know it's immortal choices we all make them here life is converging past present and future according to our understanding and ability to relate it is love pure and simple where we find our common ground space isn't empty it is alive with feeling for its progeny you are beautiful to me.no matter how you appear on the outside I appreciate being heard...
5th May 2024 7:41am
Best to go out with someone who'll test the water for you, then you can join in!
5th May 2024 12:25pm
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