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Piercing Sun
The sunlit bubbling stream
was in possession of a
dazzling diamond sheen.
The profuse glimmer
makes my soul shimmer,.
in the regions that are dimmer.
My chaos of thought
disperses in the brilliant calming light.
The piercing sun warms even the most
harrowing plight.
was in possession of a
dazzling diamond sheen.
The profuse glimmer
makes my soul shimmer,.
in the regions that are dimmer.
My chaos of thought
disperses in the brilliant calming light.
The piercing sun warms even the most
harrowing plight.
Published 25th Apr 2024
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25th Apr 2024 8:42pm
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25th Apr 2024 8:52pm
This is very thoughtful and metaphorical. You do a good job in capturing various aspects of each thing of the environment you choose to define and carry all of that into building transitions of emotion. Very poetic. You know what you're doing, heh. This is a much more "dazzling" inscription from you. Thanks for sharing!
26th Apr 2024 00:06am
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25th Apr 2024 10:24pm
I could bask in the sun for hours, the warmth envelopes me. Great imagery here.
26th Apr 2024 00:05am
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25th Apr 2024 11:11pm
26th Apr 2024 00:04am
You've captured the bright sunlit water so well.
It leaves a shimmer in my heart.
I love it.
♡
It leaves a shimmer in my heart.
I love it.
♡
30th Apr 2024 6:48am
