Roots

Great job... last line... poetic gold...

Thank you my friend!

Aww. Thank you, you are too kind. ❤️

nice haiku but sad

Thank you. The author is sad.

I love a good haiku.

LJ

They love you too 😊
Thank you

Very painful and somewhat dark.  The metaphors alluding to the emotional state, I can almost visualize and feel.  Like an unripe growth crying out for harvest unprepared or something, heh.  Anyway, good job of capturing the torture of perhaps an unfilled need of love in struggling alone.   I can relate similarly, to some degree.  That's just some of what I get from this, heh.  I could be wrong.  Thanks for sharing!

Hi, thx for checking out. Being that I am in a lot of emotional pain,
I guess I try to present that creatively, in a way that might resonate with someone.
This was actually really difficult to write.
I like the way you interpreted it. Thanks for all your support.

Yeah, I hope you can weather the storm, and yield peaceable times ahead.  I realize what you're going through now is difficult.  Thanks for sharing again, and I'll see you around.

There is agony in your pen, well delivered.

Yup. There is agony in my veins as well.
I'm thankful writing is a vehicle I can use.

Thank you for checking out, you def got it.

Great haiku, cool image.

Thank you so much. I wanted an image with roots in it, lol.

I can never do a haiku as good as that… this is too hard

There was a time I couldn't write a haiku for my life, lol
You might surprise yourself
Thank you for reading and the nice comment, I appreciate