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It doesn't add up!
There's a topsy-turvy place
where time runs backwards,
numbers aren't what they seem;
logical rules apply,
but not the logic we're used to.
There's a wonderful place
where I've just aged backwards
because forty-seven is less than forty-six.
Nothing is something,
zero is bigger than one million,
yet the best gift
turns out to be worthless.
In this place,
women are valued more highly than men,
but children are valued most of all.
The greatest rewards
come from working with those that seem,
on first glace,
to be difficult, awkward or spiky.
With patience, they pay dividends—
a life lesson for us all.
Where are we?
where time runs backwards,
numbers aren't what they seem;
logical rules apply,
but not the logic we're used to.
There's a wonderful place
where I've just aged backwards
because forty-seven is less than forty-six.
Nothing is something,
zero is bigger than one million,
yet the best gift
turns out to be worthless.
In this place,
women are valued more highly than men,
but children are valued most of all.
The greatest rewards
come from working with those that seem,
on first glace,
to be difficult, awkward or spiky.
With patience, they pay dividends—
a life lesson for us all.
Where are we?
Written by
Wafflenose
(Ellie)
Published 18th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Answer will be given tomorrow.
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Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 8:20pm
I think we are in heaven.. where women are valued more highly than men... definitely in heaven
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Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 8:22pm
Nice idea! But does time move backwards in heaven, or does heaven transcend time? How is 47 less than 46?
Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 8:34pm
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18th Apr 2024 8:37pm
Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 8:39pm
I'll probably lose sleep over this unless it's Monopoly? Did I guess right?
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Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 9:03pm
Darn! I didn't really think it was the right answer. This is so much fun it's unbelievable! You're one smart cookie. Oops, I meant to say waffle 🧇
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Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 9:05pm
Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
Ahh, that's the ticket. I'm probably going to end up as confused as ever. Wish me luck, you little trickster!
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Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 9:23pm
Hehehehe!!! Good luck!
I did wonder if my puzzles were too obvious. Now I'm wondering if they're too obscure!
I did wonder if my puzzles were too obvious. Now I'm wondering if they're too obscure!
Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 10:24pm
Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 8:40pm
This is delightful, I’m going to ponder this tonight and maybe have an answer before you reveal.
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Re: Re. It doesn't add up!
18th Apr 2024 8:41pm
Yay! I'm so glad people are enjoying them (and/ or going crazy because of them!!) I spend quite a bit of time dreaming up new ones. This is a departure from my usual introspective, stripped back take on the world. Puzzles and ciphers and weird alphabets!