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Cerulean blue
Cerulean blue is the lips
Of the winter storm, of her kiss
Conveying, agony & ecstasy
In her artic eyes
And in the darkness of my night
She is my gravity,
Her moon moves the tides
To wash me clean
Of the winter storm, of her kiss
Conveying, agony & ecstasy
In her artic eyes
And in the darkness of my night
She is my gravity,
Her moon moves the tides
To wash me clean
Published 6th Apr 2024
| Edited 7th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Was tryin to sleep, but these words kept popping up in mine head, an would let my rest until gettin my lazy arse up & writin them down, lest forgettin them by mornin light... Dont know... may have to come back an rework this, someday... someday;
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7th Apr 2024 00:46am
14th Apr 2024 9:46pm
Hello mine friend, how goes it todays... thank you... an your right, was goin to expand on this ans write about a dark Irish Witch, but it quickly grew to long, an this part got lost in over writing... Mayhaps will revisit the idea someday... but I'm a llazy lazy man, hehehe, take good care mine friend: Eddie
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- Edited 1st Nov 2024 6:45pm
7th Apr 2024 3:21am
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14th Apr 2024 9:31pm
Hello bcharmed, how are you doin; Thank you, twas how was feelin when I wrote this... I took a break from darker writes, an just simply wrote what was feelin an thinkin at that exact moment... Take good care: deadwolf
7th Apr 2024 11:48am
14th Apr 2024 9:16pm
Thanks mine friend... it was difficukt for me to keep it short... As kept adding to it, it was longer, but felt forced, writin and adding just for the sake of adding... it changed the original write & flow... it just felt better than the longer forced write... twas a case of short an simple is better than long an forced...
11th Apr 2024 9:08pm
14th Apr 2024 9:20pm
Greetings Silverymoon, how are you; thank you... sorry for late reply, it is difficult for me to sometimes to be able to get up, an go to the computer... take good care: deadwolf
21st Aug 2024 2:38pm
