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noir (a very short story)
she was hotter than a
highjacked snub nose
38 with it's serial numbers
scratched off and more
dangerous than a steamy
back alley and a crooked
deal gone bad on some
late August Baton Rouge
night
...but my oh my!
how she looked in
a black dress and
pearls
and how many good
men went bad for her
with just a wink of her
eye
...the graveyards ain't
snitchin'
Published 6th Apr 2024
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6th Apr 2024 9:53am
Dear BK,
Nailed it. I can see the smoke filled gum shoe office complete with fedora hat and trench coat. Killer last line. Great write. H🌷
Nailed it. I can see the smoke filled gum shoe office complete with fedora hat and trench coat. Killer last line. Great write. H🌷
6th Apr 2024 2:02pm
20th May 2024 5:16pm
Reads like the start of a great novel, the dame knows her game and who knows how many men went to their grave for her.
Cool piece bk
Cool piece bk
21st May 2024 00:16am
