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I woke up to the urge
I woke up to the urge.
The urge to masturbate.
Masturbate to the image.
The image of us together.
Together in bed playing.
Playing until I spill.
Spill my guts to you.
I dreamt all night.
All night that you’re here.
Here waking me up.
Up to find I am alone.
Alone with just my hand.
the hand that helps the urge.
the urge to masturbate.
The urge to masturbate.
Masturbate to the image.
The image of us together.
Together in bed playing.
Playing until I spill.
Spill my guts to you.
I dreamt all night.
All night that you’re here.
Here waking me up.
Up to find I am alone.
Alone with just my hand.
the hand that helps the urge.
the urge to masturbate.
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Samnash
(Sam Nash)
Published 3rd Apr 2024
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Re. I woke up to the urge
3rd Apr 2024 10:02pm
Re: Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 9:23pm
What the ?!?!… really ?!? Use the hand !!! Very helpful !!! What kind of a friend are you?!
Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 00:16am
your ink poignantly expresses emotional attachment to a person and longing for intimacy with them. Creatively use the topic of masturbation to emphasize the strength of your desire and lust for that person.
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Re: Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 10:03pm
You got that right. Masturbation is the ultimate love and desire for a person .. you love them even when they’re not close …
Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 00:21am
Well, I don't know what to comment...
I like the rhyme,... it is dynamic...
... But,... What else can I comment?...
OK, OK,...
If romantic and/or erotic dreams are not enough...
... just masturbate and write poems...
...
I like the rhyme,... it is dynamic...
... But,... What else can I comment?...
OK, OK,...
If romantic and/or erotic dreams are not enough...
... just masturbate and write poems...
...
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Re: Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 10:06pm
I like your take on things … when are romantic and erotic dreams ever enough?!… well back to writing poems and masturbating of course
Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 7:38am
Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 1:05pm
Re. I woke up to the urge
4th Apr 2024 9:57pm
Love me like you touch me like you
I remember this song to reading your heart touching writing ✍🏻😋
I remember this song to reading your heart touching writing ✍🏻😋
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Re. I woke up to the urge
24th Apr 2024 3:23pm
we have thin walls here and everyone is always listening for evidence I'm breaking and delusional so they can join in a game of throw the ptsd victim and after 2008 and they squeezed until I snapped and went crazy he lit a trash can of fire lying to the sheriffs and saying I did someone co signed it and it was over treated like a criminal they through me in the psych ward... and attacked my life with withdrawing me from methadone cold and shooting me up with every medical restraint they had one of them causing known permanent brain and memory damage...I've always accepted less than after my mom rejected me and so did my step mom...after one by one all the sisters and the men stabbed me in the back and standing up for him a man who is extremely manipulative and careful I still love him and see your games poor so and so that evil witch I was attacked cruelly in fresno he pressed on my pressure points and abandoned me I was angry at god and was spiritually attacked now I see Luce in all of you playing a bullying game and I wait for Him and His justice not mine it may be a long one....so feel sorry for the one who makes all of you feel so special... I am trapped by a broken heart and mind I am loyal tried and true after twenty five years he feeds you my pain that's what gets you off and you pity fuck him claiming it's real love good luck with that kind of love for a man like this...since 2009 I've been keep a diary my anxiety was crippling my delusion strong my brain altered you are all culpable for being bullies... thank you to those who have awaken to my plight... to the rest of you God knows your intent.
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