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Towards the Sun
entwined in love engulfed passion
in their own worlds desires meet
finding themselves in slow burn
speak conversations of hearts
fire ignited by touches of skin
the soaring tide of pumping blood
deafening in their ears within
where they hear songs of needs
towards the zenith of the sun
hooded horde in ecstacy soar
in their own worlds desires meet
finding themselves in slow burn
speak conversations of hearts
fire ignited by touches of skin
the soaring tide of pumping blood
deafening in their ears within
where they hear songs of needs
towards the zenith of the sun
hooded horde in ecstacy soar
Published 1st Apr 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by a competition
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1st Apr 2024 7:44pm
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fire ignited by touches of skin
the soaring tide of pumping blood
deafening in their ears within
where they hear songs of needs
fire ignited by touches of skin
the soaring tide of pumping blood
deafening in their ears within
where they hear songs of needs
1st Apr 2024 8:24pm
Oh yes absolutely 😊 thanks for dropping by and reading Solomon, I really appreciate your feedback,,👍
2nd Apr 2024 10:25am
Dear G,
The subtle yet fiery passion is very well blended. I enjoyed you could close yours eyes and feel the heat in this piece. Lovely. H🌷
The subtle yet fiery passion is very well blended. I enjoyed you could close yours eyes and feel the heat in this piece. Lovely. H🌷
2nd Apr 2024 2:10pm
Hi H, thank you so much for dropping by and reading:) I always appreciate your feedback.
3rd Apr 2024 00:26am
3rd Apr 2024 2:22am
3rd Apr 2024 9:07am
Sunsually clean while sonveying its naghtiness beneath the hood... very nice indeed!
JJ
JJ
3rd Apr 2024 12:33pm
Thank you JJ for dropping by and reading 🙂 and for the RL. Appreciated as always 😊
3rd Apr 2024 12:34pm
5th Apr 2024 6:24am
6th May 2024 00:55am
Truly a wonderful write, you took the same comp idea and created two approaches, so different and unique.
Great work.
Great work.
