The Last Time

Hello Mairee, how are you... This write touched me, totally changin the harder, tougher mood that was originally in... but good poetry can do that... very well written mine friend: deadwolf

Your comments really touched me, my friend! I thank you!

Faith

i have felt this way far too many times, well done faith

Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem!

I hate those moments when I don't know its the last time of something. You captured the emotion well, Faith:)

Thank you so much, Grace! I appreciate your wonderful comments!

it a very touching
heartfelt

Tightens the heart Lady

So heartfelt. Excellent description to depict that treasured loss.  

Is knowing it's the last time or not knowing worse?

I'm not sure which is worse but both ways can be painful. Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Debbie. I deeply appreciate them.

Faith

your poignant pen captures the bittersweet longing and reflection that accompanies the realization of a final encounter. you regret and desire for a deeper connection are expressed with heartfelt sincerity. your yearning to hold onto a cherished moment resonates deeply, reminding us of the preciousness of our interactions and the importance of embracing them fully. lovely write.

Hoi hoi F.,
Tight writing!
Like it a lot…..
Like the artwork too.
Kind regards, Gus

Thanks, Gus! You made my heart smile. So good to see you stopping by. Happy Easter to you and your family!

Faith