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Good Friday
I read
my story
doesn’t have to end
with thirty
dirty
silver coins;
I pray
it doesn’t,
But I
am
so very weak
my story
doesn’t have to end
with thirty
dirty
silver coins;
I pray
it doesn’t,
But I
am
so very weak
Published 30th Mar 2024
Author's Note
For years I’ve attempted to write something for Good Friday or Easter.
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30th Mar 2024 6:11am
Dear TMW,
I thoroughly appreciated the perspective in this piece. The formatting and spacing leant itself to such a lovely prayer-like meter. It had me thinking of how my actions affect everything and everyone around me. And how “human” we are. Great write.
Happy Easter. H🌷
I thoroughly appreciated the perspective in this piece. The formatting and spacing leant itself to such a lovely prayer-like meter. It had me thinking of how my actions affect everything and everyone around me. And how “human” we are. Great write.
Happy Easter. H🌷
30th Mar 2024 6:20am
How human we are, so wondrous, but so weak. Not our intended outcome, I expect. And you’re right, all we do matters. Thank you Honoria. Happy Easter ^^
I echo Honoria's comment. Poem makes us ask, is there a Judas lurking in all of us? Your poem answered my curiosity when I looked to see if anyone wrote anything connected to Good Friday/Easter.
30th Mar 2024 8:00am
