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Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 2:51pm
Re: Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 2:53pm
Poem came to be in a moment of enlightenment.
Appreciate the comment on art as well
Thanks
Appreciate the comment on art as well
Thanks
Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 3:59pm
I agree with Willows. The painting is dark and brooding. Love it & the message.
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Re: Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 4:01pm
When you want art and alternative life you know where to find me …. Nothing about my existence is standard ..
Thanks K.O.
Thanks K.O.
Re: Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 4:21pm
Try to keep things simple even though they never are ...
I just told my muse I can't decide if I want to work out or jerk off ....
Thx T
I just told my muse I can't decide if I want to work out or jerk off ....
Thx T
Re: Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 4:32pm
Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 5:17pm
You show enlightenment. Always give the ladies orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 5:41am
Re: Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 10:26am
Hmm, that's interesting.
We will need to explore further ...
Cabbage is the rage lately, not sure I understand that but I'm observing ....
We will need to explore further ...
Cabbage is the rage lately, not sure I understand that but I'm observing ....
Re: Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 3:16pm
Cabbage is the new kale?
In my potato salad reverie, I forgot to mention that I really like the painting. I see different things every time I look at it (shadowy figures, etc.) Minimal color has maximum effect. You do it well.
In my potato salad reverie, I forgot to mention that I really like the painting. I see different things every time I look at it (shadowy figures, etc.) Minimal color has maximum effect. You do it well.
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Re: Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 4:16pm
Yeah, the new kale. Kind of weird but that’s our world.
Fun to match this kind of poem with my moodier paintings. Glad you like darling Pink …
Fun to match this kind of poem with my moodier paintings. Glad you like darling Pink …
Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 5:51pm
Just enough tension with that upper blue stroke to keep it balanced. Well done.
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Re: Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 6:29pm
Yes, it's amazing how those little areas work to create aura and mood.
Thank you fellow traveler ....
Thank you fellow traveler ....
Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 6:00pm
Re: Re. The Life
28th Mar 2024 6:30pm
I was always Dominant until I found someone I wanted to serve on occasions....
Rocked my world 🌎
Rocked my world 🌎
Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 4:02am
Dear PS,
I love the starkness of the painting. For me it evokes a dark passion that says “maybe”…
The poem, as per, I totally dig. No flowery stuff just batta bing!
H🌷
I love the starkness of the painting. For me it evokes a dark passion that says “maybe”…
The poem, as per, I totally dig. No flowery stuff just batta bing!
H🌷
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Re: Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 10:29am
Dear H,
Yes, I bring out the painting and other sections of it when I'm going deep into human psyche and other matters of The Life, poetic or otherwise ...
Stay tuned, more art and brain sex to follow ...
Thx babe Honoria..🤠😻
Yes, I bring out the painting and other sections of it when I'm going deep into human psyche and other matters of The Life, poetic or otherwise ...
Stay tuned, more art and brain sex to follow ...
Thx babe Honoria..🤠😻
Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 11:48am
So…
When I look at this, I see a figure in a cage. I think the starkness is appropriate and yet, I like the pops of color. They suggest playfulness, hope maybe. I think it’s the perfect depiction of your poem.
Both of these rock, btw.
When I look at this, I see a figure in a cage. I think the starkness is appropriate and yet, I like the pops of color. They suggest playfulness, hope maybe. I think it’s the perfect depiction of your poem.
Both of these rock, btw.
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Re: Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 12:13pm
I really like your interpretation Mary.
This poem just jumped into my head and of my thousands of images and paintings this one struck me most so you're right in my brain jar on all....
BIG LIKE THOUGHTS AND COMMENT
Thanks
This poem just jumped into my head and of my thousands of images and paintings this one struck me most so you're right in my brain jar on all....
BIG LIKE THOUGHTS AND COMMENT
Thanks
Re. The Life
29th Mar 2024 10:48pm
Re. The Life
30th Mar 2024 1:44am
The poem really makes you think... whose? Love it! Also, I can feel the message of the poem in the art piece above. I see that passion characterized in the sporadic bits of color amongst the grit in black and grey. And the pure white of servitude, with even purer intentions
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Re: Re. The Life
30th Mar 2024 2:32am
Yes, your read it and commented expertly !
The write came to me in a flash. BDSM is so much more than sex, the discipline of serving and training shines front and center. I’ve used this painting before … it defines me in many ways ..
Appreciate your astute comment
Thx for your vision
The write came to me in a flash. BDSM is so much more than sex, the discipline of serving and training shines front and center. I’ve used this painting before … it defines me in many ways ..
Appreciate your astute comment
Thx for your vision
Re. The Life
4th May 2024 8:29pm
What is life without them? Great philosophical spill with minimalism makes us think alot.
Well done sir.
Well done sir.
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4th May 2024 8:34pm