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Why do you float?
Because I know
the way people
take every fault
and secret only
to rub it in your
face like vomit,
consider this
a free lesson
in pulling your
body back to
the ground.
Published 25th Mar 2024
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25th Mar 2024 3:02pm
I have been guilty of both having it rubbed in my face and doing the rubbing I take with great responsibility the guarding of secrets sometimes I break under great torment and internal strife then I feel like a traitor when I've done my best...that's what your poem inspired thank you ❤️
25th Mar 2024 3:56pm
Using our quirks & differences against us seems to be one of humanity's most grievous cruelties
25th Mar 2024 10:22pm
This was very powerful.
I too, am guilty of both.
I choose kindness now.
Your words really packed a truthful punch about society.
I too, am guilty of both.
I choose kindness now.
Your words really packed a truthful punch about society.
