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A Sweet Dream Turned Sour
Phoebe figured she
would be a big time
movie star someday.
She had not figured
on her appearing
naked in a porn flick.
would be a big time
movie star someday.
She had not figured
on her appearing
naked in a porn flick.
Published 14th Mar 2024
Author's Note
This free verse poem shows us a sweet dream that has turned sour for one young person.
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12th Jun 2024 7:23pm
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13th Jun 2024 11:07am
There’s a lot more to you than posting smut.
Your poems have a Bukowski like feel of hopelessness that is real.
I like reading your stuff …
Your poems have a Bukowski like feel of hopelessness that is real.
I like reading your stuff …
13th Jun 2024 6:49pm
