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Braile
I see you on the horizon
in violence sparking
you're playing with words again
yes, I can see...
tricky little metaphor
provoking the verb
colliding with intent
I watch closely then not at all
choosing not to see
I don't want to play today
the powers that be know me
I know them well
legions will ride or die
I am well-guarded
secreting my visions
weeping epiphanies I succumb
communicating with stars
you will never know their language
it is a language of nuances
a code you can't crack
so exalt yourself on your black throne
with the knowledge your void is voiceless to me
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Re. Braile
6th Mar 2024 6:19am
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7th Mar 2024 1:00am
Re. Braile
6th Mar 2024 8:13am
You had me at the first 2 lines.
I really enjoyed this one. 🖤 ✨
Again please forgive me, I'm behind on reading posts
I really enjoyed this one. 🖤 ✨
Again please forgive me, I'm behind on reading posts
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Re: Re. Braile
7th Mar 2024 1:01am
hello beautiful Debbie please don't worry lovely lady I am grateful when you read I know time is of the essence 💕thank you graciously...
Re. Braile
6th Mar 2024 11:03am
Cool poem. The metaphors can open a new world inside. The smoothness of the poem shows your ability to write anything. Sometimes with to many metaphors the read becomes difficult. Not here. Well executed Crimsin..xxoxo
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Re: Re. Braile
7th Mar 2024 1:03am
good evening dearest Visions thank you graciously I'm happy this was open for you 💕
Re. Braile
6th Mar 2024 4:46pm
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7th Mar 2024 1:03am
thank you graciously dearest Oral I hope you have a lovely evening hugs and love ❤️
Re: Re. Braile
7th Mar 2024 1:05am
hello beautiful Ahavati thank you for feeling the power of the write...I deeply appreciate your thoughts... I hope your evening is beautiful 💕
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7th Mar 2024 11:20am
Re. Braile
8th Mar 2024 7:37am
That's a beautiful poem despite feelings expressed:) you are a talented writer Dear Crimsin.
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Re. Braile
9th Mar 2024 8:24pm