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cold bound
Tied at the wrists
Face sideways on the dirt
He promised that it couldn't
get better than this.
Hands gripping the waist
thrusting from behind
Bound ankles shivering
Please, make haste.
The air is chilly
breath vapors are swirling
blood rushing member pumping
He has me doing this, really?
Decayed leaves flutter
Sweat drips down full breasts
Cock bursting warm fluid
makes her pussy shudder.
Gentle kisses on the neck
ice melt, drip drop
Hemp ties now cut
"I heard a footstep."
Face sideways on the dirt
He promised that it couldn't
get better than this.
Hands gripping the waist
thrusting from behind
Bound ankles shivering
Please, make haste.
The air is chilly
breath vapors are swirling
blood rushing member pumping
He has me doing this, really?
Decayed leaves flutter
Sweat drips down full breasts
Cock bursting warm fluid
makes her pussy shudder.
Gentle kisses on the neck
ice melt, drip drop
Hemp ties now cut
"I heard a footstep."
Published 20th Feb 2024
Author's Note
S: "Fuck... it's freezing out here. Don't you ever get cold?"
H: "No. But I can help you warm up if you'd like..."
H: "No. But I can help you warm up if you'd like..."
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20th Feb 2024 9:33pm
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21st Feb 2024 8:49pm
Oh no, it may be hard for some people with fill in what the scenario is! I feel like if I update it, I will make two extra stanzas and also add better description- though some people enjoy filling in mental blanks lol.
Lowkey afraid to get too descriptive with this genre right now
Lowkey afraid to get too descriptive with this genre right now
21st Feb 2024 5:55pm
Hemp . this is like a rape ??
short poem with erotic incomplete lustful brevity..
short poem with erotic incomplete lustful brevity..
21st Feb 2024 8:31pm
Hmm, maybe I could add a stanza that explains where the hemp rope or ties came from. That would fill the gap that the audience would fundamentally have to imagine otherwise.
Now for the poem being a r*pe, it is not intended to describe that scenario. I could see how it can be interpreted that way. But it is meant to convey that the "bottom" isn't entirely happy with her decision to have that kind of sex in the end. The man, however, appears to be rather satisfied. It is implied that it is his idea.
Now for the poem being a r*pe, it is not intended to describe that scenario. I could see how it can be interpreted that way. But it is meant to convey that the "bottom" isn't entirely happy with her decision to have that kind of sex in the end. The man, however, appears to be rather satisfied. It is implied that it is his idea.
21st Feb 2024 8:37pm
Gentle kisses on the neck
ice melt, drip drop
Hemp ties now cut
"I heard a footstep." this means you did not see him coz you were raped from behind, only footsteps heard, hes still incognito ? i guess
ice melt, drip drop
Hemp ties now cut
"I heard a footstep." this means you did not see him coz you were raped from behind, only footsteps heard, hes still incognito ? i guess
21st Feb 2024 8:58pm
the first few stanzas show in italics the thoughts of the woman. But will need to work on it better, it needs to be more clear that the poem refers to BDSM beyond the hashtag!
Oh, yes i see; he has me doing, willingly doing it; ..
PS/ I actually don read Eros stuff, but this one held my attention for its metaphor..
so good luck in the challenge.......
PS/ I actually don read Eros stuff, but this one held my attention for its metaphor..
so good luck in the challenge.......
11th Mar 2024 5:24am
Right up my alley ;-)
"He has me doing this, really?" > this brought back some memories.
I have asked myself that same question regularly...
...enjoyed this piece big time...
"He has me doing this, really?" > this brought back some memories.
I have asked myself that same question regularly...
...enjoyed this piece big time...
11th Mar 2024 6:11am
Oh yes,
it's definitely a complex feeling to want to try something new or maybe even please someone dear to you... and they are on some extra sh_t lmao just I can't even rn haha
Thanks Duende!
it's definitely a complex feeling to want to try something new or maybe even please someone dear to you... and they are on some extra sh_t lmao just I can't even rn haha
Thanks Duende!
