cold bound

So erotic. Guess who is coming UP behind you? Hugs and love.Oral

I have a very good guess ^_^

x's & o's bro!

Hits all the marks

BIG LIKE

Thank you!!

I don't understand

How so? Do you feel the poem should be more blunt?

No I feel your smarter than I am may take me a few reads to get

Oh no, it may be hard for some people with fill in what the scenario is! I feel like if I update it, I will make two extra stanzas and also add better description- though some people enjoy filling in mental blanks lol.

Lowkey afraid to get too descriptive with this genre right now

Hemp . this is like a rape ??
short poem with erotic incomplete lustful brevity..

Hmm, maybe I could add a stanza that explains where the hemp rope or ties came from. That would fill the gap that the audience would fundamentally have to imagine otherwise.

Now for the poem being a r*pe, it is not intended to describe that scenario. I could see how it can be interpreted that way. But it is meant to convey that the "bottom" isn't entirely happy with her decision to have that kind of sex in the end. The man, however, appears to be rather satisfied. It is implied that it is his idea.

Gentle kisses on the neck  
ice melt, drip drop  
Hemp ties now cut  
"I heard a footstep." this means you did not see him coz you were raped from behind, only footsteps heard, hes still incognito ?  i guess

the first few stanzas show in italics the thoughts of the woman. But will need to work on it better, it needs to be more clear that the poem refers to BDSM beyond the hashtag!

Oh, yes i see; he has me doing, willingly doing it; ..
PS/ I actually don read Eros stuff, but this one held my attention for its metaphor..
so good luck in the challenge.......

Right up my alley ;-)

"He has me doing this, really?" > this brought back some memories.
I have asked myself that same question regularly...

...enjoyed this piece big time...

Oh yes,

it's definitely a complex feeling to want to try something new or maybe even please someone dear to you... and they are on some extra sh_t lmao just I can't even rn haha

Thanks Duende!

Don't you dare change a damn thing about this masterpiece,  

Thanks ;)

I wrote it in honor of my very freaky friend.