Bittersweet

Makes sense to me also.

Well I knew it would 😊
Thx for such a a quick response, much appreciated.

Great juxtapositions.

My love life is the shrieking bats.

Thank you. Mine is a void, lol

hello beautiful Debbie it makes sense to me too 💕beautiful poem

Thank you so much my friend.
I love when you stop bye.

I like the comparing and contrasting of emotion within the metaphors you use.  "Agony's sun to ecstasy's moon" reminds me of a synesthetic kind of interpretation.  Very original.  You depict quality scenery and environment, as well as situation and transition within this too.

You're growing in rhyme flow as well; in that you're becoming more succinct and concise in the build ups and break downs to the rhymes, rather than being too wordy, or straying off syllabic parameter.  Rhyme in itself is a beautifully defining discipline.  Once you master syllable stress, and develop a vocabulary, it's like having more colors to the pallet to add to a painting.

The main thing I get from this is your strong desire for intimacy or being close to a boyfriend or husband.  It's like a paradox or conundrum - your desire for love is always there, yet knowing all of the baggage and price that comes with it, such as heartbreak, leaves you torn.  The concepts and dualities you use to balance such expression and equation are quite unique.  There is a bit of a trace of your conviction for love to be found in every sentence in this.

Anyway, I can't tell you something you don't already know.  Keep putting work in.  There is always room for growth, or something new, or even to improve.  I enjoyed the read - thanks for sharing, and I'll see you around!

Hello! You are onto me once again 😊
Yes regarding love I do feel torn, I want love
but not the heavy baggage of heartache.  
Thank you for all the feedback. It's so kind that you take
the time to provide that for me.  
I really struggled to write this, just very unsure of myself.  
So it was really nice to find you stopped bye with encouraging words.  
Take care, talk soon

Love the easy flow of unique & challenging imagery xx thank you for sharing

Thank you, I really appreciate it.

Makes sense to me too... nicely ink db...

Thank you!

I'm a little behind reading posts ❤️

Makes a great deal of sense!

What was I thinking, of course it makes sense to artists, lol
Thank you for checking out!

Makes sense to me as well

Much respect

Naaj

All my fav writers understand.
My mind is always at war with the elements of ecstasy
vs. agony, lol

Thank you for stopping bye, it means alot

Light 'n' shade, man! ✌ I dig it, even if was trying to sound like a hippie, lol. I have the longish hair after all. But yes, I do understand your message. Whilst someone somewhere in this world is having the time of their lives, there's someone somewhere else having a shitty time. It ain't right. We should all be having an equally GOOD time, in my opinion. Btw, I'm having a party later & everyone's invited! 😉

Will there be specialty Martini's? Lol

I agree, everyone should be happy and find true love.
Wow is that naive, lol

You make me smile, thanks for stopping bye

Don't expect too much... it's Billy remember! ;-)

Hello Debbie. This is such a beautiful poem. I can feel your message loud & clear.

Aww, thank you for that feedback.
I'm happy I can make something resonate.

I wrote a cool post today, but took it down
Might repost it.
Nice to see ya around!