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Obsession
Excuse me.
Excuse me!
EXCUSE ME!!!
Yes you. I have a question to ask.
Why does it take several times for you to respond to me?
You can't answer that
I know why...
It's because your head is buried into that device they call an i-phone
It seems that your compulsive behavior with this machine is creating a barrier amongst others
Sure you may have loads of friends online, but you can't truly see, feel or hear them
Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post over & over again?
We all need stamps of approval from time & time again
But how much?
Where is the line drawn between this computer world and reality?
Stop investing countless hours looking for someone who cares about what you think or what you have accomplished
Believe me, your not being left out of anything
Let's not compare, because it's only going to hurt you in the long run
To look for happiness and love through social media isn't the solution
Interactions with real human experiences, that's what we all need.
Excuse me!
EXCUSE ME!!!
Yes you. I have a question to ask.
Why does it take several times for you to respond to me?
You can't answer that
I know why...
It's because your head is buried into that device they call an i-phone
It seems that your compulsive behavior with this machine is creating a barrier amongst others
Sure you may have loads of friends online, but you can't truly see, feel or hear them
Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post over & over again?
We all need stamps of approval from time & time again
But how much?
Where is the line drawn between this computer world and reality?
Stop investing countless hours looking for someone who cares about what you think or what you have accomplished
Believe me, your not being left out of anything
Let's not compare, because it's only going to hurt you in the long run
To look for happiness and love through social media isn't the solution
Interactions with real human experiences, that's what we all need.
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23rd Jan 2024 12:57pm
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23rd Jan 2024 1:44pm
I couldn't agree more. Everywhere I go, I see people on their phones. People are now becoming robotic.
Well said words in this. Your opinion should ne heard by everyone with an Iphone or android.
Well said words in this. Your opinion should ne heard by everyone with an Iphone or android.
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23rd Jan 2024 2:06pm
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23rd Jan 2024 3:12pm
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23rd Jan 2024 3:13pm
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23rd Jan 2024 5:22pm
I agree so much. I wish I could say I’m not apart of the generation that has their heads buried in phones, but I am :(
Amazing job!
Amazing job!
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23rd Jan 2024 5:31pm
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23rd Jan 2024 6:41pm
I concur with you......sad that people are becoming addicted to the virtual world
Great write !
Great write !
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23rd Jan 2024 7:12pm
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23rd Jan 2024 9:21pm
Bravo! I could not have said that better myself. Those are my thoughts all the time, as I'm posting or scrolling my phone. I can't stand the obsession yet I'm a part of it. I'm glad you posted this. Needs to be heard!!!
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Re. Obsession
23rd Jan 2024 9:58pm
Oh so true!! It does need to be heard and I think we need to look at ourselves before we transform into something scarier then we can ever imagine.
Re. Obsession
24th Jan 2024 9:48pm
Guilty as charged.
Mostly because I’m always here. Even if I’m not logged on, I’m buried deep.
Mostly because I’m always here. Even if I’m not logged on, I’m buried deep.
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24th Jan 2024 10:09pm
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26th Jan 2024 9:13pm
A similar thing is happening to me, but it's not because of my mobile phone. When I'm writing, I can't hear most of what my wife is saying to me. Good write.
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26th Jan 2024 10:15pm
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12th Feb 2024 8:34am
Greetings, how are you; Dig this write, you narrate it just right man...
"Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post over & over again?
We all need stamps of approval from time & time again
But how much?"... to me this is the heart of your write... Take good care man:
"Your "friends" are not really your "friends"
Is it that necessary to refresh your post over & over again?
We all need stamps of approval from time & time again
But how much?"... to me this is the heart of your write... Take good care man:
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12th Feb 2024 10:39am
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19th Jun 2024 00:25am
Very truthful in the end times that is occurring between the battle of the brain and the solitude of becoming demoralized against technology, sir.
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19th Jun 2024 00:30am
Yes it is. The billions on this planet will become slaves to this technology. We maybe already there. Walking zombies from coast to coast.
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