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Betty
beautiful Betty, sister of my soul's sorrow
blend in with tomorrow so he won't see your sadness
sacred understanding is loving you
in the heated moments in the in-between
time stops and waits for you holding his breath
inhale slowly exhale and breathe
your love is unparalleled '
there isn't another like you
matter of fact and bold
with a ferocity that isn't to be fucked with
you make me softer in a world so hard
I bring you flowers on a cold night
whispering secrets to your soul
a bond, a friendship to unfold
sanctity in a smile
serenading your melancholy grief
esteemed beauty confounding man-dom
your right to own
hold your head high
rock those stiletto spikes
I know your gentleness within
a storm chaser
finding her way in a place so desolate
I love you girl
Author's Note
I love you lady 💕
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Re. Betty
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2024 11:03pm
She's a great poet here on this site.
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Re: Re. Betty
22nd Jan 2024 11:07pm
she really is I just wanted her to know she is loved thank you for your thoughtful comment 💕
Re. Betty
23rd Jan 2024 00:44am
A wonderfully touching tribute to a ferocious poetess from another ferocious poetess.
Many times you both leave me speechless💕
Many times you both leave me speechless💕
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Re: Re. Betty
23rd Jan 2024 1:11am
good evening beautiful Her thank you graciously I really hopes she likes this 💕
Re: Re. Betty
23rd Jan 2024 1:12am
Re. Betty
23rd Jan 2024 7:13am
Nicely done Crimsin...
Betty is a beautiful mind...
With a verve and vivacity
that is...
Electrifying...
Betty is a beautiful mind...
With a verve and vivacity
that is...
Electrifying...
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Re: Re. Betty
24th Jan 2024 00:24am
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24th Jan 2024 00:25am
Re. Betty
23rd Jan 2024 1:48pm
Re: Re. Betty
24th Jan 2024 00:25am
thank you graciously dearest RT for the love on this write to a very special lady 💕
Re. Betty
23rd Jan 2024 6:59pm
She's an original badass that also turned me instant fan, the moment I read her work, several years ago.... This is such an amazingly apropos and brilliantly crafted tribute to one helluva woman.
She makes me/drives me to want to be a better writer (and human).... you as well, Bren.
Thank you for sharing your talents with us... I feel lucky af to have you here.
🌹💙 - B
She makes me/drives me to want to be a better writer (and human).... you as well, Bren.
Thank you for sharing your talents with us... I feel lucky af to have you here.
🌹💙 - B
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Re: Re. Betty
24th Jan 2024 00:27am
hello beautiful Blue thank you I too noticed write away how fiercely beautiful and a gifted writer she was... you yourself were hard not to notice being a gorgeous person and writer 💕
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24th Jan 2024 00:27am
Re. Betty
26th Jan 2024 2:17am
Sometimes we click with people immediately. This is wonderfully written to someone who
gets the flow of writing - how it pours out when you truly care about someone.
This is a great example of that:)
gets the flow of writing - how it pours out when you truly care about someone.
This is a great example of that:)
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Re: Re. Betty
26th Jan 2024 3:10am
thank you beautiful Adelphina yes, she is a beautiful person and writer she inspires me 💕
Re. Betty
26th Jan 2024 3:21am
You have been one of my dearest friends here for 12 years.
This made me cry.
Thank you my lovely sister.
"I bring you flowers on a cold night
whispering secrets to your soul
a bond, a friendship to unfold
sanctity in a smile
serenading your melancholy grief"
I take your flowers, and your beautiful comfort.
I adore you. Thank you
This made me cry.
Thank you my lovely sister.
"I bring you flowers on a cold night
whispering secrets to your soul
a bond, a friendship to unfold
sanctity in a smile
serenading your melancholy grief"
I take your flowers, and your beautiful comfort.
I adore you. Thank you
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Re: Re. Betty
26th Jan 2024 3:28am
I love you sweetheart I really do I wish I could take your pain I have to confess if I was in your shoes about now I'd be thinking of doing something stupid...silence is cruel...hugs lovely one you're beautiful inside out 💕 I'm happy you like the poem I was worried...
Re. Betty
21st Apr 2024 1:57pm
I love the human feelings, Love or hate or grudge or anything, that is frankly and openly shown.
it gives the truth and cleans the misty doubts, say it like it is is the best way to make sincere friendship and never foes
Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts with your sister poetess..
it gives the truth and cleans the misty doubts, say it like it is is the best way to make sincere friendship and never foes
Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts with your sister poetess..
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