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Damsel in Distress
She was a damsel, soft and fair,
With a gentle voice, a mild air.
We met by surprise, love took its cue,
Until that night, when passion grew.
She turned into a tigress bold,
A force within, a story untold.
Overwhelmed, by her passionate whim,
In love's embrace, we started to swim.
Now I am the gentle, she's untamed,
In her wild spirit, love is framed.
I am the mild, she continues to beguile,
In this dance of love, mile after mile.
In wonder I ponder, who was the rescue,
For now, it seems, a plan well in view.
Roles ever-changing, a love that's true,
A story of us, in shades of every hue.
With a gentle voice, a mild air.
We met by surprise, love took its cue,
Until that night, when passion grew.
She turned into a tigress bold,
A force within, a story untold.
Overwhelmed, by her passionate whim,
In love's embrace, we started to swim.
Now I am the gentle, she's untamed,
In her wild spirit, love is framed.
I am the mild, she continues to beguile,
In this dance of love, mile after mile.
In wonder I ponder, who was the rescue,
For now, it seems, a plan well in view.
Roles ever-changing, a love that's true,
A story of us, in shades of every hue.
Published 8th Jan 2024
Author's Note
In "Damsel in Distress," I delve into the intricate dance of love, exploring the evolving roles within a relationship. The juxtaposition of a gentle damsel and a passionate tigress reflects the fluidity and unpredictability of love's journey. Relationships, much like the characters in the poem, transform, surprise, and weave a narrative that is both tender and intense.
Love, in its essence, defies rules and embraces spontaneity. As the poem suggests, "love has no rules or shades, just flow and see what is in store." It invites readers to embrace the beauty that unfolds when hearts connect and melt into the shared experience of love.
Leave a comment if you like, love to hear your thoughts. Peace and love for all!
Love, in its essence, defies rules and embraces spontaneity. As the poem suggests, "love has no rules or shades, just flow and see what is in store." It invites readers to embrace the beauty that unfolds when hearts connect and melt into the shared experience of love.
Leave a comment if you like, love to hear your thoughts. Peace and love for all!
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9th Jan 2024 1:12am
Your words seem to convey a poetic tale that always seem to leave the intellect wanting more and I appreciate the fact I can comprehend the moral of your story quite vividly.
Enjoy your evening my poet and smile upon your Grand Rising to relax in it
Enjoy your evening my poet and smile upon your Grand Rising to relax in it
9th Jan 2024 3:22am
9th Jan 2024 11:44am
The contrast of the 'wild-untamed' with the 'gentle & mild' reminded me of Tom Hirons' poem "Sometimes a Wild God" (which you can hear him read, here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F5lJnbB4woQ)
9th Jan 2024 3:59pm
