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< today, i'm bringing about world peace >
This morning i was thinking about world piece
while masturbating in the shower and all that
righteous energy felt so good i hurt myself
but it's only a little tear and though it did
bleed a lot it was a small price to pay for
bringing about world peace.
After that i went to the grocery store and got
one of those giant bottles of cheap wine and
after a few glasses i can feel it happening:
i'm bringing about world peace.
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Published 29th Apr 2012
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29th Apr 2012 1:00pm
i like that randomness of yours; it always cheers me up.
you're definitely one of a kind!
you're definitely one of a kind!
29th Apr 2012 1:45pm
29th Apr 2012 5:17pm
Lemmy's back wit a ven
geance.....
peace by piece peace-work for thee peace of all our pieces
geance.....
peace by piece peace-work for thee peace of all our pieces
30th Apr 2012 00:30am
Ray
I had been waiting for this day like so
many others. And this moment of reading
will stay for quite sometime.
After watching 'An Andalusian Dog' this
somehow has the feeling of a jack-in-the
box analogy.
A strange little piece about world peace.
:)
Sumeet
I had been waiting for this day like so
many others. And this moment of reading
will stay for quite sometime.
After watching 'An Andalusian Dog' this
somehow has the feeling of a jack-in-the
box analogy.
A strange little piece about world peace.
:)
Sumeet
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Jan 2019 8:46am
9th May 2012 3:06pm
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12th May 2012 5:22am
But was the wine free-trade?
Actual question: Was the 'piece' deliberately inconsistent with the 'peace'?
I like the deliberate reduction of the self, and the intense, casual ramblings. Cool style you’ve got there, Lemmy. And the alligator clit. really adds je ne sais quoi, no?
Probably my favorite type of poem. It’s in-your-face with the dirt, and comes out oddly reflective and clean, with a deep finish.
Clever. Very clever.
Actual question: Was the 'piece' deliberately inconsistent with the 'peace'?
I like the deliberate reduction of the self, and the intense, casual ramblings. Cool style you’ve got there, Lemmy. And the alligator clit. really adds je ne sais quoi, no?
Probably my favorite type of poem. It’s in-your-face with the dirt, and comes out oddly reflective and clean, with a deep finish.
Clever. Very clever.
