Alters The Day

Poignant and beautiful. The beauty within should be that which is sought most. The outside world is the fantasy. Very inspiring poetry.

hello dearest poet I love your insight on this poem it is beautiful thank you 💕

This poem skillfully captures the emotional landscape of the  inner world, particularly in relation to the interplay between sadness, memories, and hope. The opening lines set a contemplative tone, hinting at a longing for release from the weight of sorrow. The idea that the soul alters its needs and desires according to mood reflects the fluid nature of emotions and their influence on one's perception of the world.

The poem delves into the complexities of pain and remembrance, exploring how hurt can linger and shape one's experience. The phrase "my memories are mine to covet" suggests a personal ownership and a willingness to embrace the past, even if it entails moments of suffering. The juxtaposition of dying a little to breathe again captures the paradoxical nature of growth and renewal emerging from struggle.

The use of "colorful blues" as a metaphor for repressed emotions finding expression is evocative, conveying a sense of vibrant release amidst melancholic feelings. The closing lines celebrate the beauty inherent in the connection between souls, emphasizing the significance of shared tenderness and the hopeful anticipation of more joyful days. The imagery of indigo shades deepening and glistening in the light adds a touch of visual allure, further enhancing the poem's impact.

Overall, this poem adeptly navigates the complexities of human emotions, capturing both the darkness and the beauty within the speaker's internal landscape. It invites readers to reflect on the intricate interplay between sorrow, remembrance, and hope, leaving a lasting impression of resilience and the transformative power of emotional experiences.

hello dearest poet let me say you really wowed me with your indepth understanding of this poem...giving me further understanding of the poem I was expressing...I was unsure how it would be received so often people don't want to explore this aspect of their soul... it is beautiful in its own way...here is a song for you to say thank you...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9WHRBzvrSQ

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad that my interpretation resonated with you and provided you with a deeper understanding of your own poem. Exploring the depths of the soul through poetry can be a beautiful and meaningful experience. I appreciate your expression and willingness to share such personal thoughts and emotions. I look forward to listening to the song you've shared as a token of your gratitude.

I feel the pain, but also find this uplifting in your wisdom of knowing yourself. Beautiful write.

good morning beautiful Pink One thank you graciously 💕

"gentle day it is beautiful today
I will hold my diary close and take note"
Breathing in the moment and then jotting it down it's the best way to capture it and freeze it in time.
Nicely done.

thank you graciously dearest Wally yes I agree 💕