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Obsession 2.0
I've got this YOU obsession
It's under control
Problem is ....
I don't want it under control
I want the mayhem of desire
Clawing and scratching
Fingernails on chalkboards
Insomnia with hard-ons raging
Tired, horny and exhilarated
Placid is not good for long
I'll do what you ask of me
I'm trying too
Some addictions are easier
Substances
French Fries
Work and Working out
Healthy and not so
Call me Daddy or not but just call
It's under control
Problem is ....
I don't want it under control
I want the mayhem of desire
Clawing and scratching
Fingernails on chalkboards
Insomnia with hard-ons raging
Tired, horny and exhilarated
Placid is not good for long
I'll do what you ask of me
I'm trying too
Some addictions are easier
Substances
French Fries
Work and Working out
Healthy and not so
Call me Daddy or not but just call
Published 30th Dec 2023
| Edited 1st Jan 2024
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30th Dec 2023 5:02pm
Now this is a great write Nice #2 Poetspeak I adore the honesty in your writing
Bat
Bat
30th Dec 2023 5:09pm
This was a truth write.
No proclamations of redemption and promises I can't keep.
Appreciate the nod Bat !
Thx
No proclamations of redemption and promises I can't keep.
Appreciate the nod Bat !
Thx
30th Dec 2023 6:22pm
Part of this made us laugh, thinking of our youth an being strung out on an older woman. The similarities are all the same when you're strung out. Thanks dude this is a tight one .
30th Dec 2023 6:28pm
Yeah ME
I’m of the age where I’m running out of redemption and bullshit.
It is what it is and the rest is corn starch…
Thx !
I’m of the age where I’m running out of redemption and bullshit.
It is what it is and the rest is corn starch…
Thx !
30th Dec 2023 6:59pm
Sounds pretty solid to me. Redemption can be overrated. Honesty is what it’s all about.
Here’s to New Year’s resolutions!
Here’s to New Year’s resolutions!
30th Dec 2023 9:28pm
Yeah
Just live your life
You only need to answer to yourself
Happy 2024, Good to see you Mary
Thx
Just live your life
You only need to answer to yourself
Happy 2024, Good to see you Mary
Thx
30th Dec 2023 7:09pm
This was hot.
I like the way you’re picking the surface shit you hide behind off like a scab and digging deep. This shows you are fine… but fuck fine. You want to be fucked up, not fine, and Dylan Thomas that shit.
This has twists and depth and I dig it.
I like the way you’re picking the surface shit you hide behind off like a scab and digging deep. This shows you are fine… but fuck fine. You want to be fucked up, not fine, and Dylan Thomas that shit.
This has twists and depth and I dig it.
30th Dec 2023 9:32pm
Wow
That's some comment B
I like it !!
I'm tired of proclaiming this or that.
I'm a heathen and proud
Case closed
I live by own code and answer to me, works pretty good so far ...
Thx
That's some comment B
I like it !!
I'm tired of proclaiming this or that.
I'm a heathen and proud
Case closed
I live by own code and answer to me, works pretty good so far ...
Thx
30th Dec 2023 7:56pm
30th Dec 2023 9:33pm
Stop by the canteen Colonel
Special treats behind the back door ..
Tell them I sent you ... !
Special treats behind the back door ..
Tell them I sent you ... !
30th Dec 2023 10:02pm
31st Dec 2023 00:57am
Hell yeah. I've never been one for New Year's Resolutions. And I'm overdue for some of that good kinda chaos. Bring it on!
❤️k
❤️k
31st Dec 2023 2:25am
31st Dec 2023 6:20am
Too much agenda puts pressure. See where the wind takes us, never know what's around the corner.
Hope you have a great 2024 sir.
Hope you have a great 2024 sir.
31st Dec 2023 12:47pm
Yes
Just go with your own personal flow.
Hopefully that's enough
Best to you too Wally !!
Just go with your own personal flow.
Hopefully that's enough
Best to you too Wally !!
31st Dec 2023 6:50am
Dear PS,
There’s a vulnerability in this piece that is very endearing as well as relatable. I always appreciate the courage in all of us when we take that risk and let the world know we have desires and wants. BIG DIG, daddy 😘
H🌷
There’s a vulnerability in this piece that is very endearing as well as relatable. I always appreciate the courage in all of us when we take that risk and let the world know we have desires and wants. BIG DIG, daddy 😘
H🌷
31st Dec 2023 12:51pm
Dear H,
Risk taking in confessionals is an ultimate of sorts. Just laying down your cards and hoping you don't bleed out in embarrassment. But even if you bleed some, you took the chance. Sometimes you just have to because regret is worse...
Thanks H
🤠💌
Risk taking in confessionals is an ultimate of sorts. Just laying down your cards and hoping you don't bleed out in embarrassment. But even if you bleed some, you took the chance. Sometimes you just have to because regret is worse...
Thanks H
🤠💌
31st Dec 2023 3:43pm
I love how you showed a certain vulnerability with a side of attitude. Makes the sentiment all that much more searing! Big like!
31st Dec 2023 4:01pm
Ha
I've got plenty of vulnerability
I'm actually grateful I get to write it
I can laugh at myself in between chronic desire ( horny ) ...
Thx W
I've got plenty of vulnerability
I'm actually grateful I get to write it
I can laugh at myself in between chronic desire ( horny ) ...
Thx W
1st Jan 2024 3:46pm
Bravo my General. If you've read my lates poem seem slike we may be on the same page. Happy New Year. XO
1st Jan 2024 3:50pm
Just read yours Colonel.
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Agree to all
Welcome back to the machine ....
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Agree to all
Welcome back to the machine ....
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