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Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
Truth is all that blue sky and sunshine are bad for you
Give me a perfectly gray day
Or grey if you're going UK
Everyone wants a water view
Give me the alley
Stray cats and beggars
Broken glass
Twilight is paradise
Dusk and my broken heart
Give me a perfectly gray day
Or grey if you're going UK
Everyone wants a water view
Give me the alley
Stray cats and beggars
Broken glass
Twilight is paradise
Dusk and my broken heart
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Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
22nd Dec 2023 3:41am
Prove it.
Just kiddin.
I like the way you show you prefer it to not shit rainbows and sunshine. That you seek the base, the crass, and the uncomfortable.
This smacks of truth and has a touch of tough-guy-turned-human.
Good shit.
Just kiddin.
I like the way you show you prefer it to not shit rainbows and sunshine. That you seek the base, the crass, and the uncomfortable.
This smacks of truth and has a touch of tough-guy-turned-human.
Good shit.
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Re: Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
22nd Dec 2023 11:54am
Yeah
All that weather stuff gets to me, the obsession with having to have a blue sky.
People freak with partly cloudy and I say bring it on... But I've always been an opposite of most human types ...
Thx for the street cred B
Appreciate
All that weather stuff gets to me, the obsession with having to have a blue sky.
People freak with partly cloudy and I say bring it on... But I've always been an opposite of most human types ...
Thx for the street cred B
Appreciate
Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
22nd Dec 2023 5:20am
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22nd Dec 2023 11:54am
Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
22nd Dec 2023 5:33am
Dear PS,
Ditto! I really like the scenario in this write and how real you’ve made it. Sunshine is overrated. Total DIG!
H🌷🌩️
Ditto! I really like the scenario in this write and how real you’ve made it. Sunshine is overrated. Total DIG!
H🌷🌩️
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Re: Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
22nd Dec 2023 11:55am
Sunshine is all good until it isn't and I've got the scars to prove it. To each their own sister H
Thx ❤
Thx ❤
Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
22nd Dec 2023 12:02pm
May you get a grey day as you watch the Knicks & Bucks on Xmas day. I should think the bucks will be run down from all the deliveries on xmas eve. Happy Holidays.
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Well I've got 2 teams I'm watching now.
Really into the Memphis Grizzlies. Been watching them for several weeks and with Ja back and Marcus Smart about to return the sky is the limit for them. Fun team. Jaren Jackson Jr. reminds me of a young Embid. Knicks are a strong decent team but have issues at Center. But I'm happy with their grit.
Enjoy the holidays and non-stop basketball Leo !!
Really into the Memphis Grizzlies. Been watching them for several weeks and with Ja back and Marcus Smart about to return the sky is the limit for them. Fun team. Jaren Jackson Jr. reminds me of a young Embid. Knicks are a strong decent team but have issues at Center. But I'm happy with their grit.
Enjoy the holidays and non-stop basketball Leo !!
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22nd Dec 2023 1:12pm
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22nd Dec 2023 1:32pm
Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
23rd Dec 2023 00:58am
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23rd Dec 2023 2:16am
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23rd Dec 2023 2:39am
Sorry to hear your heart is broken, PS & of course I hope it is only temporary or that you were just being poetic, somehow. Funny how the Greyhound stayed gray, don't you think? 😉
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Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
23rd Dec 2023 2:49am
I'll never tell Billy
A little intrigue is good for the soul
My dog is part Grey and she's a hound but not a greyhound ..
Mystery my friend ...
A little intrigue is good for the soul
My dog is part Grey and she's a hound but not a greyhound ..
Mystery my friend ...
Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
23rd Dec 2023 11:13am
You need to find a lonely woman on Christmas and give her the beat ride of her life. Keep on writing.
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23rd Dec 2023 2:53pm
Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
24th Dec 2023 2:03am
All things in balance... blue sky, gray sky, red sky...night. The blue is only nice because the gray exists.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
24th Dec 2023 2:38am
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24th Dec 2023 11:51am
Ah. Yes, me too! I was trying to sound wise... doesn't mean I know how to DO that balancing thing!! 😆
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24th Dec 2023 12:40pm
Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
25th Dec 2023 3:23pm
The way street lights & moonlight bounce off broken glass fragments is its own genre of perfection. And grey days set a more subdued tone...doesn't feel like so much frenetic energy is required of a person. Feeling the beauty in this one!
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Re: Re. Gray Grey Blue Sky Broken Heart
25th Dec 2023 3:34pm
It's Grey and kinda somber here today.
I'm down with it. This is kinda a favorite of mine. Glad it played well in your mind.
Thanks !!
I'm down with it. This is kinda a favorite of mine. Glad it played well in your mind.
Thanks !!
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31st Dec 2023 6:02am
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31st Dec 2023 12:43pm