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Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
You Can't Have my Thoughts Anymore
They were free
Not anymore
I gave everything
Carte Blanche
Holed up and pissed off
It's almost ironic
Ask me a specific question
I might answer
You run the risk though
I'm prone to form letters
PoetSpeakWritten by PoetSpeak
Published 17th Sep 2017 | Edited 19th Sep 2017
They were free
Not anymore
I gave everything
Carte Blanche
Holed up and pissed off
It's almost ironic
Ask me a specific question
I might answer
You run the risk though
I'm prone to form letters
PoetSpeakWritten by PoetSpeak
Published 17th Sep 2017 | Edited 19th Sep 2017
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Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
6th Dec 2023 11:13pm
this is powerful dearest Poet
we need your thoughts though and your artistry 💕
we need your thoughts though and your artistry 💕
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Re: Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
6th Dec 2023 11:18pm
Thank you darling Smack
Thought it was worth a return posting
You liked it the first time around too ..
🖤
Thought it was worth a return posting
You liked it the first time around too ..
🖤
Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
7th Dec 2023 00:11am
Hey PS
Can't say you didn't warn them. LOL
Caution!
It's what we do.
Nice little spill amigo
Can't say you didn't warn them. LOL
Caution!
It's what we do.
Nice little spill amigo
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Re: Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
7th Dec 2023 00:38am
I often give a warning then I open you like a
ripe watermelon. I came across this poem while looking for something else. It cracked me up so I reloaded my cannon ...
Appreciate the nod A
Thx
ripe watermelon. I came across this poem while looking for something else. It cracked me up so I reloaded my cannon ...
Appreciate the nod A
Thx
Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
7th Dec 2023 4:17am
Lettering as a kink. Being opened like a ripe watermelon, an even better kink.
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Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
Anonymous
9th Dec 2023 10:08am
Hahaha, love that ending
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Re: Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
9th Dec 2023 12:48pm
My first job in broadcasting was answering audience mail for a major television network.
My title was Reader/Coder. People would send impassioned letters often accusing the network of bias. Often they received a form letter which was printed on a card. I still remember the codes and this was many moons ago. The form letters remains etched in my mind ...
Thanks BB
My title was Reader/Coder. People would send impassioned letters often accusing the network of bias. Often they received a form letter which was printed on a card. I still remember the codes and this was many moons ago. The form letters remains etched in my mind ...
Thanks BB
Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
21st Dec 2023 2:49am
It’s so cool when you come back to a piece and the foundations have the same notion even when your bring it up to date.
BL
BL
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Re: Re. Killer Last Line ... Redux 2017
21st Dec 2023 11:53am
I've got so many poems.
Sometimes I read my older stuff and say to myself, hey that's pretty good and I re-enter them ...
Appreciate you Wally ...always
Sometimes I read my older stuff and say to myself, hey that's pretty good and I re-enter them ...
Appreciate you Wally ...always