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origins of psychosexual creation
From the meager offerings
of an untamed dervish...
thralls of metamorphosis—oh how they call out!
I hear the aching whistles
through howling winds
delicate screams echo from midnight's breast
this body dances to and fro
in automatic rhythmic swirls
true sanctuary begets insatiable hunger
upon sweetest lips, promises sing-song
hypnotic trance-like dreams
beckon purification by fired desire
dangerous, in reality
twine imaginations darkly forge together
in fiendish fortune
we carve out these dual hearts
a long awaited celebrated welcome
that slowly whittles away
in beautific mutual sacrifice
time and time again, leads to now
where dense fragrant essences of each marking
permeates hallowed ether
skies part, bowing down to our fervent jubilee
strengthening against the curvature
of brut will births profound belief
we secure together
proof in torment and toil
entering into primeval sacraments,
designs ingrained in each of us
from our earliest beginnings
compelled by
needed by
wanted by
flirting alongside the fringe
from a dangerous edge
we fuel ourselves
with potent risks
devour hearty rich flames
lick at the flavour for more
so so greedy
and soon, triumphant
we speak in tongues to Gods
or maybe it's just us, reinforcing our own language
from some ancient decree spoken to one other
passed down by sense memory
discovered in punishments of proven pain
and how that swells into answered prayer
a calling from the deepest recesses... inside
I revel, as it travels and sears perfect,
the almost unbearable hunger
keeping a known promise of wisdom
as it piques the flesh
in riveting blood boil
resuscitating creation
breathing living art
into being.
It's alive.... ALIVE!
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 31st Oct 2023
| Edited 23rd Jan 2024
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Re. origins of psychosexual creation
31st Oct 2023 10:55pm
Dear BV,
No you didn’t! This is a Halloween sizzle treat! I’m ever so thankful I didn’t have to do a trick to read this 🧙🏼♀️😉
Always, you can write these gems so beautifully poetic. And that pic! It’s perfect in lending itself to the dance of the stitched and wild. Happy Halloween and awesome write. H🌷
No you didn’t! This is a Halloween sizzle treat! I’m ever so thankful I didn’t have to do a trick to read this 🧙🏼♀️😉
Always, you can write these gems so beautifully poetic. And that pic! It’s perfect in lending itself to the dance of the stitched and wild. Happy Halloween and awesome write. H🌷
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 00:34am
I did, I did!!
Hahaha....
A spooky salute to you, dearest H! Yes, I have been itching to see if my pen still had any valuable ink, so I'm over the full Halloween moon that you felt exactly what I had hoped, when reading...Thanks for the lovely comments and for being the epitome of awesome... I hope your Halloween was everything enjoyable.
I've missed you guys.... much love sent your way ✨
🌹💙 - B
Hahaha....
A spooky salute to you, dearest H! Yes, I have been itching to see if my pen still had any valuable ink, so I'm over the full Halloween moon that you felt exactly what I had hoped, when reading...Thanks for the lovely comments and for being the epitome of awesome... I hope your Halloween was everything enjoyable.
I've missed you guys.... much love sent your way ✨
🌹💙 - B
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
31st Oct 2023 11:04pm
I can’t stand Halloween, waaaay too spooky for me, but you may just be able to change my mind with this piece of dark erotic candy!!!
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 00:36am
Ohhh Mary, you're truly a glimmering light amidst the foggy gothic mist.... I adore Halloween and all things spooky, so it makes me smile devilishly that you found pleasure here.... Yesssss!!
I hope you are doing well, I've missed being here!
Much love and well wishes, dear lady.
🌹💙
I hope you are doing well, I've missed being here!
Much love and well wishes, dear lady.
🌹💙
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
31st Oct 2023 11:36pm
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 00:54am
So sweet is the rare consumption, tis oh so true, dear MS.
It's always so lovely to see you.... Thanks so much for digging what I had to say, this All Hallow's Eve.
Much love and appreciation, my friend.
🌹-🎃
It's always so lovely to see you.... Thanks so much for digging what I had to say, this All Hallow's Eve.
Much love and appreciation, my friend.
🌹-🎃
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
31st Oct 2023 11:50pm
Absolutely awesome spooky n sexy go girl smashed out of the park
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
Thank you for being here with me, my dearest soul. I adore you and love that you felt this piece was a grand slam... I'm truly humbled and so appreciative - 🙏🏻
Btw, I've really missed being here, so again, thanks for showing me such love.... it means a lot.
🌹-🖤-🕸
Btw, I've really missed being here, so again, thanks for showing me such love.... it means a lot.
🌹-🖤-🕸
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 4:26am
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
Ahhhh, there's my lovely and wise Shaman! 🙏🏻 ✨ 💫
Thank you for taking a little walk through my fetishistic Halloween inspired ink.... I'm totally thrilled to see you and warmed that you found something here that perhaps sparked a bit of interest and allure...
I deeply love your energy and adore you sharing it with me, dear Stoney. It's always a pleasure to read your thoughts.
Much love and a whole bunch of good juju sent your way....
🌹💙 - B
Thank you for taking a little walk through my fetishistic Halloween inspired ink.... I'm totally thrilled to see you and warmed that you found something here that perhaps sparked a bit of interest and allure...
I deeply love your energy and adore you sharing it with me, dear Stoney. It's always a pleasure to read your thoughts.
Much love and a whole bunch of good juju sent your way....
🌹💙 - B
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 8:21pm
As always DEAR Poetess and Queen and friend that gave me the name SHAMAN ✍️ it's a beautiful thing to be able to walk through the mind of deepness of your thoughts 👊👍🤗🙏✍️
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Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 5:55am
bluevelvete,
you have uttered the spell perfectly that has once again resurrected the monster!
Loved your line, “flirting alongside the fringe
from a dangerous edge
we fuel ourselves
with potent risks”
Enjoyed on this midnight hour.
down2dirt
you have uttered the spell perfectly that has once again resurrected the monster!
Loved your line, “flirting alongside the fringe
from a dangerous edge
we fuel ourselves
with potent risks”
Enjoyed on this midnight hour.
down2dirt
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
Hey there, darling friend.
Giving rise to my own sense of Halloween flavor, was a fun way for me to see if I could still sorta write off the cuff. I am beyond delighted that you could feel what it was that I had deeply hoped to achieve... Flirting amidst the fringes of our innermost desires can really get the blood pumping! 🔥 🔥
Thanks for seeing me and for reading into my piece, perfectly.
Much love and belated Happy Halloween!
🌹💙
Giving rise to my own sense of Halloween flavor, was a fun way for me to see if I could still sorta write off the cuff. I am beyond delighted that you could feel what it was that I had deeply hoped to achieve... Flirting amidst the fringes of our innermost desires can really get the blood pumping! 🔥 🔥
Thanks for seeing me and for reading into my piece, perfectly.
Much love and belated Happy Halloween!
🌹💙
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 7:07am
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 9:25pm
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 9:24am
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 8:11pm
I hope you enjoyed yourself, A!
Belated Happy Halloween to you, too... - 🎃🦇👻
Thank you for being here with me... I am eternally grateful - 💙
Belated Happy Halloween to you, too... - 🎃🦇👻
Thank you for being here with me... I am eternally grateful - 💙
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 4:44pm
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 8:10pm
Huge thanks, Me!
It's a wonderful feeling to read your lovely feedback, it makes me warm and fuzzy to know you've found pleasure within my piece....
I needed that!
🌹-x
It's a wonderful feeling to read your lovely feedback, it makes me warm and fuzzy to know you've found pleasure within my piece....
I needed that!
🌹-x
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
I like it and the bride of Frankenstein image. The gathering of all your libido, sexuality, passions, reservations, and appetites that were either dormant or restrained and stitching them together. A lover provides the spark to your restrained form, nerves endings you forgot or were unaware of come to life. Your psych now ready to accept your eroticism, to learn and relish from your adventures. Now able to communicate your true feelings, without holding back. Your eyes have opened, no longer in a coma, you are alive. Wanting to liberate all those pent-up desires. You purrrr.
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
It was actually a last minute decision to kind of incorporate the methos of Frankenstein or the Bride of Frankenstein into this write, so thanks for feeling the image.... I loved it, too.
I like the idea of finding solace in not being alone within a particular realm of something that might be considered taboo by those with pitchforks!! Awakening from what feels like a far too long slumber, with passion, desire and a fervent sense of need.... is something I absolutely understand!
You totally get it.... the unadultered exhilaration of feeling alive.... so so alive!!!
HELL YESSSS!
Thanks for really delving into and completely getting it, Leo. I am not surprised you have.... yet love love love that you did.
🌹💙 💙
I like the idea of finding solace in not being alone within a particular realm of something that might be considered taboo by those with pitchforks!! Awakening from what feels like a far too long slumber, with passion, desire and a fervent sense of need.... is something I absolutely understand!
You totally get it.... the unadultered exhilaration of feeling alive.... so so alive!!!
HELL YESSSS!
Thanks for really delving into and completely getting it, Leo. I am not surprised you have.... yet love love love that you did.
🌹💙 💙
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
1st Nov 2023 10:19pm
Watching the movie weird science. Your wisdom is truly amazing. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
2nd Nov 2023 7:59pm
I do my very best, indeed!!
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, Francisco!
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹B
Thanks for the lovely sentiments, Francisco!
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹B
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
2nd Nov 2023 8:47am
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
heh heh heh heh 😈
Twas always in the making.... *wink
Thanks for the read, my lovely poet.... I deeply appreciate it.... and you! ;p
Hope you had a spooktacular Halloween!!
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
Twas always in the making.... *wink
Thanks for the read, my lovely poet.... I deeply appreciate it.... and you! ;p
Hope you had a spooktacular Halloween!!
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
2nd Nov 2023 12:08pm
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
2nd Nov 2023 12:16pm
Wow, A!!
That's truly high praise, thank you so much for thinking so. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to leave such generous feedback, which brightened my disposition by renewing a little bit of my sense of self this morning.
Kindest regards,
🌹B
That's truly high praise, thank you so much for thinking so. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to leave such generous feedback, which brightened my disposition by renewing a little bit of my sense of self this morning.
Kindest regards,
🌹B
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
3rd Nov 2023 11:49pm
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
3rd Nov 2023 11:53pm
love love LOVE that you've felt the gothic passion within.... I couldn't ask for more!
Thank you again, my dear.
🌹💙 💙
Thank you again, my dear.
🌹💙 💙
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
3rd Nov 2023 11:54pm
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
4th Nov 2023 1:23am
Artsy, sexy, scary and intriguing. You did an awesome job with this piece.
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
4th Nov 2023 4:19am
just couldn't resist writing something for Halloween.... thanks for feeling the sexy intrigue here Walter! You know how much I love trying to spill your skittles!
🌹-🌈
🌹-🌈
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
4th Nov 2023 9:21am
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
4th Nov 2023 3:47pm
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
5th Nov 2023 8:31pm
Dearest, Lady Blue❣
Oh how I've missed you and your erotic masterpieces. Your erudite use of language is so breathtakingly sensual and supremely seductive.
"in reality
twine imaginations darkly forge together" What an amazing reality this would be 🐻💞🐰
"dense fragrant essences of each marking
permeates hallowed ether
skies part, bowing down to our fervent jubilee"
A thrilling celebration of coital scents mingling in a sublimely erogenous cocktail.
"punishments of proven pain
and how that swells into answered prayer"
A truly spiritial coupling.🙏🐻💞😇
My sweet BB you've hit my spot...pressed my button...elevated my desire. Thank you🌹❣Bravissima bella poetry goddess🐻💞🐰
Oh how I've missed you and your erotic masterpieces. Your erudite use of language is so breathtakingly sensual and supremely seductive.
"in reality
twine imaginations darkly forge together" What an amazing reality this would be 🐻💞🐰
"dense fragrant essences of each marking
permeates hallowed ether
skies part, bowing down to our fervent jubilee"
A thrilling celebration of coital scents mingling in a sublimely erogenous cocktail.
"punishments of proven pain
and how that swells into answered prayer"
A truly spiritial coupling.🙏🐻💞😇
My sweet BB you've hit my spot...pressed my button...elevated my desire. Thank you🌹❣Bravissima bella poetry goddess🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
Ohh my goodness...!!!... I had to take time to recuperate from the deep scarlet blushing these comments produced... lol...
I've missed you and most things about DUP, so I can surely relate... Your incredibly kind feedback truly blew me away, my majestic one!! This was a spur of the moment write for Halloween, which I hoped would convey that dark delicious seduction which you so wonderfully felt... Yay!! You know how much I adore hitting that spot like a bullseye!! ;p
You're a lovely sight for sore eyes and one of most favorite things about DUP, BB!
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with and for being so attuned to my particular sapiosexual frequency.... It means so so much to me to share with those who understand from their core where I'm coming from...What an ultimate joy!
(Don't be stranger... I hope you are doing well)
Loads of love, hugs, kisses and earnestly warm holiday wishes ✨ 💫
🐰💞🐻
I've missed you and most things about DUP, so I can surely relate... Your incredibly kind feedback truly blew me away, my majestic one!! This was a spur of the moment write for Halloween, which I hoped would convey that dark delicious seduction which you so wonderfully felt... Yay!! You know how much I adore hitting that spot like a bullseye!! ;p
You're a lovely sight for sore eyes and one of most favorite things about DUP, BB!
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with and for being so attuned to my particular sapiosexual frequency.... It means so so much to me to share with those who understand from their core where I'm coming from...What an ultimate joy!
(Don't be stranger... I hope you are doing well)
Loads of love, hugs, kisses and earnestly warm holiday wishes ✨ 💫
🐰💞🐻
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
6th Nov 2023 2:30am
Reading you again was the perfect ending for my day. Your poetic journey into the heart of erotic darkness was like reading Anne Rice on a night like tonight but singed with the flames of desire that only you can ignite. I felt the Gothic dream of sensuality come alive within the soul of my masculinity and ride the feminine waves of your fire into a bonfire of libido. Within the folds of your words lie truths of eroticism and passion that crescendo into a Samhain night for lovers. And I relish the passion in your lyrics like such a cherished evening.
Deep sensual passion love,
John
Deep sensual passion love,
John
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
I bask so deeply along with you in this(my) surrealistic gothic dream of sensual musk and mutual understanding, my darling... Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing your incredibly astute feedback and impressive insight, which means the world to me! I am wowed at how wonderfully deep you can delve into my psyche, accessing my secret self with the skillful precision you do... It's a refreshing and wholly transformative experience that I cherish beyond my ability to rightly convey...🙏🏻
Enormous thanks and all my continued adoration....always.
🌹💙 💙
-S
Enormous thanks and all my continued adoration....always.
🌹💙 💙
-S
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
8th Nov 2023 4:11pm
Fueling ourselves with potent risks
-and you fueling us with potent words.
❣️❣️❣️
🙏
-and you fueling us with potent words.
❣️❣️❣️
🙏
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
I love feeling like I've helped to top off that tank, KP... vrrrooom!! ;p
Beyond thrilled that you felt my ink's hopeful intent.
Thank you for the generous list add and for leaving me with a warm sense of deep satisfaction...Mmmm - x
Much love and warmest holiday wishes ahead ✨
🌹B
Beyond thrilled that you felt my ink's hopeful intent.
Thank you for the generous list add and for leaving me with a warm sense of deep satisfaction...Mmmm - x
Much love and warmest holiday wishes ahead ✨
🌹B
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
8th Nov 2023 4:13pm
Wow, so that’s what poetry looks like.
How lucky am I? Just a random click!
Seriously though, great writing.
How lucky am I? Just a random click!
Seriously though, great writing.
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
Awww... You're a beautifully kind force of loveliness this morning with these incredible comments! Thank you for feeling my ink like you have, TA. This piece was my wishful attempt at being seductively dark, in tribute to my favorite time of year.... and I guess my favorite writing topic, too! ;p
I really appreciate you stopping by to check me out, even if by happenstance.... that's what serendipity is all about, right!??
Glad you found something here you enjoyed...
Warmest regards,
🌹💙 - B
I really appreciate you stopping by to check me out, even if by happenstance.... that's what serendipity is all about, right!??
Glad you found something here you enjoyed...
Warmest regards,
🌹💙 - B
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
12th Nov 2023 10:57pm
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
13th Nov 2023 4:35pm
You're awesome, CS.
Thanks for the uplifting comment.... I love it... and am humbled by it!
🌹💙 - B
Thanks for the uplifting comment.... I love it... and am humbled by it!
🌹💙 - B
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
28th Nov 2023 3:28am
Sensational ink Blue. Reminds me of Cronenberg's film Crash, from JG Ballard's dark novel of the same name.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
29th Nov 2023 5:54pm
HARRY!!!
It's a holiday miracle, to have you visit!!... lol....It is truly lovely to see you 🦋 Hope you are yours are doing well down under! Thanks for the extremely generous compliment/comparison that's epic feedback, indeed... *hat tip.
So stoked you found enjoyment here, my friend. I look forward to hopefully seeing more of you!
Much love and warmest appreciation,
🌹💙 - B
It's a holiday miracle, to have you visit!!... lol....It is truly lovely to see you 🦋 Hope you are yours are doing well down under! Thanks for the extremely generous compliment/comparison that's epic feedback, indeed... *hat tip.
So stoked you found enjoyment here, my friend. I look forward to hopefully seeing more of you!
Much love and warmest appreciation,
🌹💙 - B
Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
30th Nov 2023 4:55am
Haha! It's good to be back Blue...missed your wonderful poetry my friend.
Cheers...Harry X
Cheers...Harry X
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Re. origins of psychosexual creation
29th Nov 2023 7:43pm
How in Dante's hell did I miss this?!!
I can only envy the Frankenstein who inspired of this level
of gravitational darkness
....you took me there and back Ms. Lady
Yeah you did!
Effin fantastic!!
Naaj
I can only envy the Frankenstein who inspired of this level
of gravitational darkness
....you took me there and back Ms. Lady
Yeah you did!
Effin fantastic!!
Naaj
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
Your thoughtful feedback made me smile that kind of way only someone who's in on the secret can understand and recognize.... deeply personal and devilishly sly... 😈
Thanks for feeling my All Hallows Eve mojo, dearest Naaj.
It's lovey, how you get me..... - x
🌹💙
Thanks for feeling my All Hallows Eve mojo, dearest Naaj.
It's lovey, how you get me..... - x
🌹💙
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
3rd Dec 2023 6:09pm
Love the Frankenstein’s monster trope. So many think of the cloddish Boris Karloff, but the monster was gentile with a an inherent desire to be human. The monster’s bride wasn’t created because Frankenstein was afraid of the potential unholy alliance.
The way you pull the tropes through with your trademark sensuality is fucking delicious. The ownership of self and the power play is
The way you pull the tropes through with your trademark sensuality is fucking delicious. The ownership of self and the power play is
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Finding your comments on my page expressed in the wonderfully articulated way you see me and my thought process makes for a truly uplifting moment, B.... one's that mean more than you could know. Over past few month's, life has been seriously brow beating me with a deluge of difficult personal family issues, which really has turned my entire existence upside down, in trying to navigate.
It's the little reprieve from all that enormity, methinks....
So thanks for that and for feeling me, E.
You're a gem.
-S
It's the little reprieve from all that enormity, methinks....
So thanks for that and for feeling me, E.
You're a gem.
-S
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
22nd Jan 2024 11:38pm
This is some unbelievable writing. I love the depth and imagery you created. Amazing!!
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Re: Re. origins of psychosexual creation
23rd Jan 2024 4:18am
You're very kind, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me and leaving this truly wonderful feedback.... I really do appreciate it, muchly.
🌹-B
🌹-B
Re. origins of psychosexual creation
26th Feb 2024 5:53am
Oh my sweet Lady Blue, how I've missed your invigorating eroticism🌹Blown away by -
"...where dense fragrant essences of each marking
permeates hallowed ether" Would that every sensual encounter elicited this kind of joy "skies part, bowing down to our fervent jubilee"
I am simply enthralled with this piece...and, frankly, primaly (if that's a word) aroused. You know how to push all my buttons
Bravissima❤ I am going to really enjoy catching up on your work 🐻💞🐰
"...where dense fragrant essences of each marking
permeates hallowed ether" Would that every sensual encounter elicited this kind of joy "skies part, bowing down to our fervent jubilee"
I am simply enthralled with this piece...and, frankly, primaly (if that's a word) aroused. You know how to push all my buttons
Bravissima❤ I am going to really enjoy catching up on your work 🐻💞🐰
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