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Halloween deception
The witch sprinkled her brew
Adding mint to the poisonous stew
Hoping the old bat on it would choke
But drats! he loved it
And asked for more.
Adding mint to the poisonous stew
Hoping the old bat on it would choke
But drats! he loved it
And asked for more.
Published 31st Oct 2023
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31st Oct 2023 6:13pm
Dear R,
There’s a bit of humor in this piece that made for a great twist. I hate when I like something I was determined not to. Well done. H🌷
There’s a bit of humor in this piece that made for a great twist. I hate when I like something I was determined not to. Well done. H🌷
1st Nov 2023 00:48am
succinct, though of course it’s well known that when it comes to bats
they like pepper and not spearmint (countryside knowledge I discovered in an old book I haven’t written yet!) 💀
they like pepper and not spearmint (countryside knowledge I discovered in an old book I haven’t written yet!) 💀
1st Nov 2023 2:31am
4th Nov 2023 1:16am
5th Nov 2023 3:39pm
Love the little twist there Robert...
Some mint sounds lovely.
But who can resist witches brew? ;)
Some mint sounds lovely.
But who can resist witches brew? ;)
