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Food for thought (22w)
His ice cream cone
Was a delicious choco double
Proud of it he was
Licked it with glee
Tripped, fell on his knees
And it and he ended up in the puddle.
Was a delicious choco double
Proud of it he was
Licked it with glee
Tripped, fell on his knees
And it and he ended up in the puddle.
Published 30th Oct 2023
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31st Oct 2023 00:46am
Dear R,
Oh no! Poor thing. I’m using this metaphorically because it always seems as soon as I’m having a good day there’s something disappointing around the corner. Terrific piece. H🌷
Oh no! Poor thing. I’m using this metaphorically because it always seems as soon as I’m having a good day there’s something disappointing around the corner. Terrific piece. H🌷
31st Oct 2023 1:08pm
Glad you like. PS: same here. It's as if there's some higher Being sending us some sort of signal........Regards, Robert.
1st Mar 2024 7:16pm
I am hoping you're doing ok out there in the world, my friend, as I noticed you've not been on site for awhile.
Hopefully we'll see you around sooner rather than later.
This poem is like the story of my life, condensed... lol. The metaphor hits home, intentional or not...
Warm regards,
🌹💙 - B
Hopefully we'll see you around sooner rather than later.
This poem is like the story of my life, condensed... lol. The metaphor hits home, intentional or not...
Warm regards,
🌹💙 - B
