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I'm a slasher...
I slashed
the day
with responsibilities...
I slashed
the night
with vivid desires...
I slashed
my childhood
with medicine bottles...
I am slashing
my youth
on the dark roads of depression...
I slashed
the net of love
with the flame of candles..
I slashed
the desires of my heart
with the ax of tears...
I slashed
the thirst of water
with people's hatred...
the day
with responsibilities...
I slashed
the night
with vivid desires...
I slashed
my childhood
with medicine bottles...
I am slashing
my youth
on the dark roads of depression...
I slashed
the net of love
with the flame of candles..
I slashed
the desires of my heart
with the ax of tears...
I slashed
the thirst of water
with people's hatred...
Written by
dimpy
(dimpsmoon)
Published 16th Oct 2023
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#life
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Re. I'm a slasher...
16th Oct 2023 8:57am
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16th Oct 2023 8:58am
Re. I'm a slasher...
Anonymous
16th Oct 2023 8:59am
I've been there poetess
From slasher to survivor you are
Blessings to you
From slasher to survivor you are
Blessings to you
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Re: Re. I'm a slasher...
16th Oct 2023 9:11am
Re. I'm a slasher...
16th Oct 2023 2:42pm
Re: Re. I'm a slasher...
16th Oct 2023 3:31pm
Thank you very much LJ for appreciating my stuff so much and giving me a place in your list... ❤
Re. I'm a slasher...
16th Oct 2023 5:00pm
Re: Re. I'm a slasher...
16th Oct 2023 5:08pm
Re. I'm a slasher...
16th Oct 2023 6:54pm
I agree with wolfatthedoor - "a lot of emotions tied in this one". Favourite verses (for erotic connotations):
I slashed
the night
with vivid desires
I slashed
the net of love
with the flame of candles..
I slashed
the desires of my heart
with the ax of tears...
You may or may not know that in slang in England "a slash" means passing water, so those used to referring to it that way might misread your heading as meaning, in formal Engliah "I am a urinator!"
I slashed
the night
with vivid desires
I slashed
the net of love
with the flame of candles..
I slashed
the desires of my heart
with the ax of tears...
You may or may not know that in slang in England "a slash" means passing water, so those used to referring to it that way might misread your heading as meaning, in formal Engliah "I am a urinator!"
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Re: Re. I'm a slasher...
17th Oct 2023 11:28am
Re. I'm a slasher...
17th Oct 2023 2:33am
I'm glad you are letting your emotions out. You are brave person. Keep on writing.
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