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gone
your quiet anger
dissolved what feelings I had left...
there in the moment
and gone the next...
the love
simply vanished...
and
.
.
.
.
you would never know,
it was there at all......
Published 28th Sep 2023
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28th Sep 2023 3:16am
Yes it does happen like that at times, emotions are indeed strange to the flesh. Tight write Lady
28th Sep 2023 3:26am
thank you graciously dearest Me it does happen that way sadly I love always usually so this isn't true to me 💕
28th Sep 2023 3:26am
28th Sep 2023 3:29am
thank you dearest Wolf for reading and commenting as I was telling Me mine are not I love for keeps... this is more my observation of others 💕
28th Sep 2023 3:29am
Billy's still here for you, crimsin. There's always somebody who cares, you should know by now! Not my words but I endorse them. 😊
28th Sep 2023 3:31am
thank you dearest Billy I'm glad to know you are here for me and really I don't know if they feel anything for me at all 💕
28th Sep 2023 3:35am
They? Is that two or one, lol? I know you're speakin' in the 3rd person singular, it's ok. Billy luvs ya! 😚
28th Sep 2023 3:36am
I know I have bad grammar yes I mean one are you alluding there are more than one lol?
Certainly not! I know you're a bit of a raver on occasion but I can't imagine you sharing. I'd be happy to give my love to one person too, if I had one person, lol. I'm in a silly mood, forgive me. However, I understand what you're going through, regarding the poem. I'm certainly not treating it trivially. 😊
28th Sep 2023 3:59am
you be you Billy always I love you the way you are 😊
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28th Sep 2023 8:32am
29th Sep 2023 2:27am
thank you graciously dearest Ron for reading and commenting love and light my friend 💕
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29th Sep 2023 2:28am
thank you beautiful Dragonfly I thought with the sparce words it would work I'm happy it did for you 💕
28th Sep 2023 6:57pm
Hugs to you dearest crimsin. Relationships and emotions can be so strange at times. Holding you in thought today :)
29th Sep 2023 2:30am
hello beautiful Her this is a strange type of relationship but unlike the poem my feelings stay for a person regardless if they are there or not 💕
24th Oct 2023 10:40pm
