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Legendary
I murmur mostly to myself
something about
needing to feel you
in new places
which clamor for your magic
then wait
(despite how difficult)
allowing small purposeful mews
to travel
where it is
that lust usually guides me
my patience ebbs
in the best of ways
unable to stand it any longer
I take your tongue
between my lips
ravenous violent potential
glistens moist
and tastes even better
I am danger
carnal moans
pierce an atmospheric high
you feel my very core pulse with need
we morph together
into savage beauties
me , skillfully schooled
amidst an artistry of longing
whose mere whimpers
utterly consume
you, relish this new hard arousal
excitedly explore
how it dissolves away rational thought
calling forth epic magnificence
I paint you with my heat
[there's such rich purity in unfiltered raw passion]
rivulets of desire
direct my tongue
to slow
vast
greatness
my strengths
are seen
felt
wholly communicated
galvanize an understanding
a flutter here
a long deliberate stroke there
teasingly travel
encompassing
winning you over
in faster and faster succession
sharing my valuable secrets
breathes steely truth into this vast discovery
where we relish our newfound mythos
I adore how you learn
all of me
as I quickly adjust
accommodate
and elicit
the legend
that is
us
something about
needing to feel you
in new places
which clamor for your magic
then wait
(despite how difficult)
allowing small purposeful mews
to travel
where it is
that lust usually guides me
my patience ebbs
in the best of ways
unable to stand it any longer
I take your tongue
between my lips
ravenous violent potential
glistens moist
and tastes even better
I am danger
carnal moans
pierce an atmospheric high
you feel my very core pulse with need
we morph together
into savage beauties
me , skillfully schooled
amidst an artistry of longing
whose mere whimpers
utterly consume
you, relish this new hard arousal
excitedly explore
how it dissolves away rational thought
calling forth epic magnificence
I paint you with my heat
[there's such rich purity in unfiltered raw passion]
rivulets of desire
direct my tongue
to slow
vast
greatness
my strengths
are seen
felt
wholly communicated
galvanize an understanding
a flutter here
a long deliberate stroke there
teasingly travel
encompassing
winning you over
in faster and faster succession
sharing my valuable secrets
breathes steely truth into this vast discovery
where we relish our newfound mythos
I adore how you learn
all of me
as I quickly adjust
accommodate
and elicit
the legend
that is
us
Author's Note
İBlu2023
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Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 7:46pm
I am sad today beautiful Blue but your sexuality and magic has lit all my zones up
such a classy lady you are 💕
such a classy lady you are 💕
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Re: Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 8:24pm
You're so lovely.
I adore you, dear lady.... So glad it could bring a little sunshine ☀
Thank you for stopping by and taking in my rays.
I'm incredibly thankful.
♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
xo
I adore you, dear lady.... So glad it could bring a little sunshine ☀
Thank you for stopping by and taking in my rays.
I'm incredibly thankful.
♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
xo
Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 7:49pm
Re: Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 8:28pm
Awww.... You're the best, Ron. Thank you for feeling the heat I had tried (hoped) to capture. That makes me feel accomplished and seen.... I couldn't ask for anything better!
All my warmest regards and sincere good tidings your way ✨
🌹-💙-⚔️
All my warmest regards and sincere good tidings your way ✨
🌹-💙-⚔️
Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 8:33pm
Re: Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 8:35pm
That's quite a wonderful comment... wow... I wasn't expecting it... at all.
Thank you so much for sharing those thoughts. It truly made me smile, Debbie.
I'm deeply appreciative - 💙
x
Thank you so much for sharing those thoughts. It truly made me smile, Debbie.
I'm deeply appreciative - 💙
x
Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 8:42pm
The way you paint your imagery is so potent! Impossible to simply read your words, they're felt...damn
~Willow
~Willow
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Re: Re. Legendary
Reading your far too kind comments leaves me renewed and motivated.... I've missed feeling both, so thank you muchly, dear Willow.
I'm humbled and enormously encouraged -
My 💙 skips a beat...
All my warmest gratitude for taking the time you have to leave your thoughts....it's really made my night.
🌹-B
I'm humbled and enormously encouraged -
My 💙 skips a beat...
All my warmest gratitude for taking the time you have to leave your thoughts....it's really made my night.
🌹-B
Re. Legendary
26th Sep 2023 10:59pm
Bluevelvete,
You have acquired your target and conquered! Yes, definitely danger! Enjoyed
down2dirt
You have acquired your target and conquered! Yes, definitely danger! Enjoyed
down2dirt
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Re: Re. Legendary
27th Sep 2023 1:49am
Hey, down2dirt :)
It's so wonderful to see you! 🦋
Yeah, I couldn't resist.... had to convey my risky side, which I'm seriously delighted you enjoyed! *wink
I adore seeing you and reading your thoughts....please don't be a stranger!
🌹💙 - B
It's so wonderful to see you! 🦋
Yeah, I couldn't resist.... had to convey my risky side, which I'm seriously delighted you enjoyed! *wink
I adore seeing you and reading your thoughts....please don't be a stranger!
🌹💙 - B
Re. Legendary
Always the exquisite poster of longing and desire. Thank you for the pleasure of the read 🌼
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Re: Re. Legendary
27th Sep 2023 5:04am
Your lovely comments and supportive presence uplifts this haggard soul. It's been a long few months and it's not going to be getting any easier any time soon, so I'm especially aware and sincerely appreciative.
Thank you, dear J
I needed that... so much.
♡♡♡♡♡
Thank you, dear J
I needed that... so much.
♡♡♡♡♡
Re. Legendary
Orgasmic bliss is within you. Two hearts become one in the heat of passion. Wish that was you and me. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Legendary
27th Sep 2023 5:01am
You're absolutely right, that beautiful ache of love's emotional complexities , really becomes like an aphrodisiac!!
It's lovely to have you here, Francisco! It's not been the same without you!!
Thank you, thank you.
🌹
It's lovely to have you here, Francisco! It's not been the same without you!!
Thank you, thank you.
🌹
Re: Re. Legendary
28th Sep 2023 1:16am
Re. Legendary
27th Sep 2023 8:17am
'' I adore how you learn
all of me
as I quickly adjust
accommodate
and elicit
the legend
that is ''
Excellent dismount!!
You threaded this vibe so lovely BV
So many words come to mind when reding this
Very inspiring indeed
Much respect
Naaj
all of me
as I quickly adjust
accommodate
and elicit
the legend
that is ''
Excellent dismount!!
You threaded this vibe so lovely BV
So many words come to mind when reding this
Very inspiring indeed
Much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. Legendary
27th Sep 2023 6:33pm
You being inspired is a hope that blossoms into fruition, making me sunny and full of possibilities, something that really allows me to breathe a bit easier, which I've very much needed over the past few months. I'm beyond delighted that you could feel the essence of what traveled through and underneath....somethings heady, quietly heartfelt and imo, enormously erotic....
Thank you for being here, dear poet.
🌹💙 💙
Thank you for being here, dear poet.
🌹💙 💙
Re. Legendary
27th Sep 2023 2:09pm
Re: Re. Legendary
27th Sep 2023 9:57pm
Lol.... You sure can flatter a girl.... Thanks so much for that juicy feedback, Robert. It made me giggle.
Thrilled you enjoyed.
🌹B
Thrilled you enjoyed.
🌹B
Re. Legendary
28th Sep 2023 4:14pm
Great lines everywhere. Terrific. Loved especially "my patience ebbs
in the best of ways" and "allowing small purposeful mews
to travel
where it is
that lust usually guides me."
in the best of ways" and "allowing small purposeful mews
to travel
where it is
that lust usually guides me."
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Re: Re. Legendary
3rd Oct 2023 5:01pm
Wow... I humbled and deeply thankful for your kind and considerate feedback, Alviola.
That line was a favorite of mine as well... glad it hit well and worked as I hoped.
Much obliged for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. I really do appreciate it.
🌹B
That line was a favorite of mine as well... glad it hit well and worked as I hoped.
Much obliged for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me. I really do appreciate it.
🌹B
Re. Legendary
3rd Oct 2023 3:18pm
This is an amazing erotic poem from your creative mind, which has no equal. A++++++++ LOL, O
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Re: Re. Legendary
3rd Oct 2023 4:59pm
You're a cornucopia of emotional uplifting, dear poet.
All my warmest thanks and appreciation.
🌹💙 - x
All my warmest thanks and appreciation.
🌹💙 - x
Re. Legendary
3rd Oct 2023 3:22pm
Re: Re. Legendary
3rd Oct 2023 4:58pm
lol... thanks for feeling that one, LilD.... I deeply appreciate the RL add and you taking a moment to leave your thoughts, some of my favorites.
🌹💙 - x
🌹💙 - x
Re. Legendary
7th Oct 2023 4:54am
I was absolutely enthralled by the dance of sensations that galvanized my manhood into the motion of your encounter.. There is fire here that consumes me as I devour your words into the inner recesses of my being. Each erotic stroke is a treasure beyond all earthly existence. And as you took me deeper into the sacristy of your womanhood I was enveloped by the purist bliss. And your poetry did this to me in the journey of your sensual encounter that I took part in through your scintillating lyrics my darling one.
Sensual love from my heart to yours,
John
Sensual love from my heart to yours,
John
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Re: Re. Legendary
22nd Oct 2023 8:14am
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Re: Re. Legendary
25th Oct 2023 4:26pm
Re. Legendary
24th Oct 2023 9:49pm
What I always enjoy from your pieces is your flow, (almost hearing your voice deliver this) when you have short one or two words lines, giving that pause as if it's breathless and evocative of passion and emotion.
Amazing work Ms. Blue
Amazing work Ms. Blue
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Re: Re. Legendary
25th Oct 2023 4:27pm
Yeah, you get it, W.... completely.
Thanks for seeing me and understanding like you do. It means the world to me.
Have a Happy Halloween my friend!
🌹-🖤
Thanks for seeing me and understanding like you do. It means the world to me.
Have a Happy Halloween my friend!
🌹-🖤
Re. Legendary
12th Nov 2023 10:59pm
Re: Re. Legendary
13th Nov 2023 4:43pm
Awww shucks.... ;p
Thanks for seeing beauty here, my lovely CS.
It's nice to be felt in such a wonderfully warm and known way...
-x
Thanks for seeing beauty here, my lovely CS.
It's nice to be felt in such a wonderfully warm and known way...
-x
Re. Legendary
23rd Jan 2024 6:37pm
Re: Re. Legendary
23rd Jan 2024 9:21pm
Keith,
You're a lighthouse amidst my rocky seas of life..... thanks so much for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.
🌹💙 - B
You're a lighthouse amidst my rocky seas of life..... thanks so much for taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.
🌹💙 - B
Re. Legendary
23rd Jan 2024 9:14pm
Re: Re. Legendary
23rd Jan 2024 9:20pm
Hey there, my lovely friend.
Thank you for sharing those kind words of feedback, it's appreciated - 🙏🏻
I'm so glad you've given DUP another try, I hope you are enjoying it.... Again, I'm thankful for your thoughtfulness.
Kindest regards,
🌹B
Thank you for sharing those kind words of feedback, it's appreciated - 🙏🏻
I'm so glad you've given DUP another try, I hope you are enjoying it.... Again, I'm thankful for your thoughtfulness.
Kindest regards,
🌹B
Re: Re. Legendary
24th Jan 2024 6:01am
Thatyou have been away makes DUP a lesser place and I know that, from their comments, the rest of the community are full of joy because you are BACK!!!
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Re. Legendary
17th May 2024 5:30pm
fucking crap... that was hot... you just made me.. nope... I'm a gentleman... not going to say what you did...
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