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a new (and improved) gospel
go home
close eyes
burn dreams
in sleep
your
love
false
prophecies
crucifixion
all too
real
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Re. a new (and improved) gospel
26th Sep 2023 2:45am
Re: Re. a new (and improved) gospel
26th Sep 2023 1:14pm
Re. a new (and improved) gospel
26th Sep 2023 3:17am
Re: Re. a new (and improved) gospel
26th Sep 2023 1:15pm
Re. a new (and improved) gospel
26th Sep 2023 11:45am
A very real depiction of unrequited love if I ever read it. This struck a cord.
A very powerful write indeed.
A very powerful write indeed.
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Re: Re. a new (and improved) gospel
26th Sep 2023 1:16pm
Re. a new (and improved) gospel
26th Sep 2023 7:37pm
I truly love your pen, bk
You slice through the muck straight to the truth and dammit how I marvel and appreciate that openness.
Thank you for being here with all that beautiful humanity, even when it aches like hell, stinging like a m'fer it's gorgeous in all it's honesty.
Hope you are doing well.
🌹 💙 - B
You slice through the muck straight to the truth and dammit how I marvel and appreciate that openness.
Thank you for being here with all that beautiful humanity, even when it aches like hell, stinging like a m'fer it's gorgeous in all it's honesty.
Hope you are doing well.
🌹 💙 - B
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Re: Re. a new (and improved) gospel
27th Sep 2023 1:38am
Thank you, my dearest Blue. Unfortunately, I'm not doing well.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. a new (and improved) gospel
27th Sep 2023 1:40am
Sending you healing thoughts and warmest wishes for better days ahead, dear bk.
(hugs and more hugs)
🌹 💙 💙 💙
(hugs and more hugs)
🌹 💙 💙 💙
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