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Hypocrisy
a life in a day
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a life in a day
your love
like pouring salt over
a thousand paper cuts
on my body
that's
all
Written by
buddhakitty
Published
28th Sep 2023
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Re. a life in a day
crimsin
(Unveiling)
28th Sep 2023 2:23am
you seem a little peeved beautiful Kitty I guess they are bad at loving... great write powerful in its brevity...
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buddhakitty
28th Sep 2023 1:22pm
Yep.
Thank you, crimson.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. a life in a day
Honoria
28th Sep 2023 1:34pm
Dear BK,
I’ve never felt more understood than I do right now with this write. Thank you.
H🌷
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buddhakitty
28th Sep 2023 4:58pm
I'm half sorry and half pleased that you could relate so deeply to this work, my dear Honoria. You deserve far better.
.hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. a life in a day
Her
28th Sep 2023 6:51pm
I feel this right to my core. Ugh…
So damn relatable and so damn good.
Wishing you peace today.
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Re: Re. a life in a day
buddhakitty
29th Sep 2023 00:14am
Much appreciated, Her.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. a life in a day
wallyroo92
24th Oct 2023 10:38pm
Ouch.
Always like how much you can say with very little words.
Nicely done.
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Re: Re. a life in a day
buddhakitty
25th Oct 2023 9:43am
I have always liked the miniature as a form for music, short stories and poetry.
Thank you. wally.
hugs
buddhakitty.
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