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what swims like a brainless Toadfish
these words
swim like brainless
Toadfish across
the screen
inadequate to
express depth
useless in their
expression
pitiful in their
definition
like trying to
capture the
image of God
on canvas...
a pale imitation
at best
I've been waiting
so long for the
horror to arrive
that I never
noticed
it's always been
here
fool that I
am
Published 24th Sep 2023
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24th Sep 2023 1:22am
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24th Sep 2023 1:51am
you sound bored beautiful Kitty I hope it isn't the case horror isn't all that it's cracked up to be... interesting writr...
24th Sep 2023 2:02am
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20th Oct 2023 3:28am
At first it felt like you were talking about floaters (don’t remember the medical term for those of us with eye problems) then I re read and saw the depth.
Well done
Well done
21st Oct 2023 8:10pm
Thank you, wally. ( I know what the other floaters feel like, unfortunately).
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
