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Deliverance
The desire to survive,
in a landscape strewn
with rocks and weeds,
grows weaker and weaker
with each waning moon,
every time less able
to revive what little light
I might still dream of.
Thus, the tiger that follows me
to the edge of the night
looks like a friend,
eyes gleaming with promise,
teeth as soft as deliverance.
in a landscape strewn
with rocks and weeds,
grows weaker and weaker
with each waning moon,
every time less able
to revive what little light
I might still dream of.
Thus, the tiger that follows me
to the edge of the night
looks like a friend,
eyes gleaming with promise,
teeth as soft as deliverance.
Published 30th Aug 2023
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1st Sep 2023 3:01pm
This is a really great poem! I do love the use of metaphors brought forth this really powerful message. The last line is truly my favorite, as the words describe how the death bound blow has introduced the comfort of freedom and liberation.
Really great work M.
Really great work M.
29th Sep 2023 3:23pm
12th Sep 2023 4:26pm
I really enjoyed this one. It has a luminous sense of imagery and the subtly dark, even Gothic tone that I love.
29th Sep 2023 3:27pm
13th Sep 2023 3:37pm
But the tigers come at night
With their voices soft as thunder
As they tear your hope apart
As they turn your dream to shame
The imagery in this is impeccable and the emotion palpable.
With their voices soft as thunder
As they tear your hope apart
As they turn your dream to shame
The imagery in this is impeccable and the emotion palpable.
29th Sep 2023 3:22pm
26th Sep 2023 2:04am
Love this Mundus. It's powerful and relatable
when we struggle for the next day:)
Great piece!
when we struggle for the next day:)
Great piece!
29th Sep 2023 3:28pm
Something that happens fairly often to me, but after all, it's the kind of thing that happens to everybody, as you said. Thank you for stopping by!
Mundus
Mundus
Aching for growth, and frustrated with solace, I find relation to this. Such depiction gives me hope and inspiration that other artists can share and take similar fashion in capturing such language and way of expression. I like the visuals and direction. Thanks for sharing.
23rd Oct 2023 9:33am
I'm so glad you were able to find some degree of comfort in my poem. I often experience such extreme feelings of despondency, and sometimes it's really difficult not to go over the edge. Thank you for your words!
Mundus
Mundus
