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I know you
Know your fears
My violence is black roses
We're two of a kind
Mind swamp
Your confessions
They warm me
Masochistic lullabies
Always there for you
Fear not the fall
Grey shadows
Mystery
Waxed poetic or otherwise
Know your fears
My violence is black roses
We're two of a kind
Mind swamp
Your confessions
They warm me
Masochistic lullabies
Always there for you
Fear not the fall
Grey shadows
Mystery
Waxed poetic or otherwise
Author's Note
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Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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30th Aug 2023 2:24am
Listening to the song These are my confessions. You give the woman love until she's in orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
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30th Aug 2023 3:03am
I juz love Masochistic lullabies.. Yup... Black roses nice concept.. After all very well written.. 💗
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30th Aug 2023 3:07am
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30th Aug 2023 12:19pm
Poems appear and I must write them.
My calling....
Thanks Brenda
Appreciate the RL 💌
My calling....
Thanks Brenda
Appreciate the RL 💌
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30th Aug 2023 4:44am
Nicely done...
I am currently working
on a project that I consider: A BDSM Love Ballad.
:)))
(I remember someone once said
that I come up with some zingers...
He was kind of right...)
"Masochistic Lullaby" is also great...
I am currently working
on a project that I consider: A BDSM Love Ballad.
:)))
(I remember someone once said
that I come up with some zingers...
He was kind of right...)
"Masochistic Lullaby" is also great...
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30th Aug 2023 12:20pm
Yes, BDSM is a ballad
Look forward to reading it Cipher
Appreciate your read and comment C !
Look forward to reading it Cipher
Appreciate your read and comment C !
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2023 5:05am
Some wonderful stuff here. I really like "My violence is black roses" and "Masochistic lullabies". Both of those could be used as titles for new poems. Curious what art would look like to go with this. Excellent write.
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30th Aug 2023 12:23pm
Thanks so much Pink ..
Art added
Think it fits... what do you think?
Thank you for the read and comment always.....
RL too
BIG THANKS
Art added
Think it fits... what do you think?
Thank you for the read and comment always.....
RL too
BIG THANKS
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2023 00:38am
Yeah, the art fits. I like the electric blue X's. X marks the spot(s).
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I use a lot of X's for some reason.
They are good space fillers and multiple stories behind them.
Thanks for the street cred Pink.
Appreciate
They are good space fillers and multiple stories behind them.
Thanks for the street cred Pink.
Appreciate
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30th Aug 2023 2:59pm
When agreed by both parties and limits set, violence can be a plus in helping to release weird emotions. PS: love that painting. Regards, Robert.
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Yes, BDSM is a lot of things to many people.
To me it's about a mindset and vibe and respect for each other's needs ...
Thanks Robert !
Glad you like the painting. I have so many, I can choose accordingly...
To me it's about a mindset and vibe and respect for each other's needs ...
Thanks Robert !
Glad you like the painting. I have so many, I can choose accordingly...
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30th Aug 2023 5:27pm
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30th Aug 2023 6:36pm
Yes
You know me A
I bring the high octane jet fuel
I've got hundreds of paintings
Write and insert.....
Many thanks
You know me A
I bring the high octane jet fuel
I've got hundreds of paintings
Write and insert.....
Many thanks
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30th Aug 2023 10:17pm
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30th Aug 2023 11:43pm
It's great to have you back Oral
BIG THANKS on this entry and art
Appreciate you Colonel !
BIG THANKS on this entry and art
Appreciate you Colonel !
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31st Aug 2023 2:18am
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4th Sep 2023 10:40pm
Reassuring write for the person concerned or anybody else who ever likes(d) masochistic lullabies. A paradox if ever there was one, surely?
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5th Sep 2023 00:33am
The people I offer my support to travel in highly intricate and intimate circles. It's not easy to understand so it appears as a paradox my good man ...
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5th Sep 2023 00:36am
I feel they are in safe hands with you sir, but I have been drinking again, so my judgment is somewhat skewed! ;-)
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5th Sep 2023 1:07am
Ah, adult beverages. I on the other hand have taken a pause with alcohol consumption. Today is 14 days off booze. I'm sleeping better I must say. But I stopped drinking for a multitude of reasons. It's temporary I'm sure but for now I'm sticking to it. My women are in good hands, you have my word ...
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5th Sep 2023 1:10am
I know! I once did 14 days without booze this year but only 14 days! I felt great & alert afterwards but still missed the bloody stuff! Well done!
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5th Sep 2023 2:08am
I miss it too to an extent but I know as soon as I have a drink I'll want another so I'm still in pause mode. Will see ...
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6th Sep 2023 3:55am
Dear PS,
Razor sharp as per. There seemed a tinge of regret or melancholy underneath. I may be transferring my own emotions but…
what’s with the no drinking? Say it isn’t so!
Art and poem are a consistent home run. 😊
H🌷
Razor sharp as per. There seemed a tinge of regret or melancholy underneath. I may be transferring my own emotions but…
what’s with the no drinking? Say it isn’t so!
Art and poem are a consistent home run. 😊
H🌷
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6th Sep 2023 12:08pm
Dear H,
Yes, 16 days off the hootch. I do this periodically. Sleep is much better without alcohol consumption, that is for sure. I call it a pause because I always return to the dragon water when I become too melancholy. So yeah, there might be a tinge of resignation in this one. You're right on as usual in your assessment of my man speak.
Stay tuned
Have a few pops for me while I baste in quietness...
🙂🙃
Thanks H
Yes, 16 days off the hootch. I do this periodically. Sleep is much better without alcohol consumption, that is for sure. I call it a pause because I always return to the dragon water when I become too melancholy. So yeah, there might be a tinge of resignation in this one. You're right on as usual in your assessment of my man speak.
Stay tuned
Have a few pops for me while I baste in quietness...
🙂🙃
Thanks H
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11th Sep 2023 8:44pm
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12th Sep 2023 3:11am
Thanks LB
No wasted words for this ranch hand.
Slice and dice and keep moving ...
Thx
🤠
No wasted words for this ranch hand.
Slice and dice and keep moving ...
Thx
🤠
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16th Sep 2023 1:04am
What I like is the rough and tender swing between artist/writer and muse, it's pretty unique.
BL
BL
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16th Sep 2023 3:38am
There's so much going on there.
We try to balance and reform but often it's a wild fire and we're both arsonists...
Thx Wally
We try to balance and reform but often it's a wild fire and we're both arsonists...
Thx Wally
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21st Sep 2023 4:26am
Always in your own lane, my guy, hands down,
Raw and unapologetically jagged..
Raw and unapologetically jagged..
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21st Sep 2023 12:02pm
I knew where I was going and what I wanted to say. No wasted words, no dress up parties, style and configuration.
I appreciate your visit and RL
Thank you PoH !
I appreciate your visit and RL
Thank you PoH !