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Never to ..
Want to be strong but
Headache all day
Longing for intimate moments
Surrendering to desire
Poetry attracted us
Worried how existence would compete if no poems
Never really believed them necessary
No my desire is homegrown
Secret stirring
Gives life to the heart in eclipse
That first embrace powerful
Never to cease or desist
Headache all day
Longing for intimate moments
Surrendering to desire
Poetry attracted us
Worried how existence would compete if no poems
Never really believed them necessary
No my desire is homegrown
Secret stirring
Gives life to the heart in eclipse
That first embrace powerful
Never to cease or desist
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Never to ..
21st Sep 2023 1:22am
hello dearest Poet I love the painting and the tender sexiness behind the poem 💕
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21st Sep 2023 2:10am
I like the high praise Brenda ❤
I took a break from writing, wrote this a few weeks ago. It needed a home ....
Thx
I took a break from writing, wrote this a few weeks ago. It needed a home ....
Thx
Re. Never to ..
21st Sep 2023 1:56am
Should we see people and faces in this painting, dang dude. You do know how to match your pieces together, tight work
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21st Sep 2023 2:15am
I'm an abstract writer, thinker and painter.
I don't ask for anyone to see anything. I think that's an organic pull that happens in each viewer....
I do like your comment ME, it's validating and I guess I needed that more than I thought..
I thank you !
I don't ask for anyone to see anything. I think that's an organic pull that happens in each viewer....
I do like your comment ME, it's validating and I guess I needed that more than I thought..
I thank you !
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21st Sep 2023 2:16am
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21st Sep 2023 12:26pm
This is a very deep thought..what will happen if you don't actually write poetry?? Like moonlight, what would the moon look like without it?? Poetry is a strong medium which saves a person from getting depressed, which presents the feelings and thoughts of a person.. It is through poetry that life becomes beautiful.. Well very nicely done!! ❤
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21st Sep 2023 12:31pm
I'm celebrating 10 years as a poet.
Close to 2,000 poems on DUP.
I wonder sometimes, do I need to write and the answer always comes back the same.
YES
Many thanks dimpy, you know the magic on words and emotion.
Appreciate you
X
Close to 2,000 poems on DUP.
I wonder sometimes, do I need to write and the answer always comes back the same.
YES
Many thanks dimpy, you know the magic on words and emotion.
Appreciate you
X
Re: Re. Never to ..
21st Sep 2023 1:10pm
Very happy to know that you have been gracing this platform for so long. .I wish that your journey continues like this. And may you keep meeting travelers like me ha ha. May your words attract people and make the this DU world proud... Xoxo
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21st Sep 2023 1:38pm
Yes, it's a long ride dimpy.
Lots of everything. A poet must take what's in front of him and make it his or her own.
You are doing well here because you write your heart. I'll keep reading.
Thanks for the encouragement !
❤
Lots of everything. A poet must take what's in front of him and make it his or her own.
You are doing well here because you write your heart. I'll keep reading.
Thanks for the encouragement !
❤
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21st Sep 2023 2:07pm
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21st Sep 2023 1:25pm
Beautiful art, wonderful words... an excellent pairing!
Publish your damn book already.
❤k
Publish your damn book already.
❤k
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Re: Re. Never to ..
21st Sep 2023 1:41pm
Thanks BT
I should do that damn book.
I need an editor crazy enough to take it on ..
"Confessions of a Lumber Salesman and other Oddities"
Volume 1
❤
I should do that damn book.
I need an editor crazy enough to take it on ..
"Confessions of a Lumber Salesman and other Oddities"
Volume 1
❤
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21st Sep 2023 2:10pm
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21st Sep 2023 9:34pm
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21st Sep 2023 9:37pm
Thanks so much Willow
This poem needed to go public and publish I did.
Your comment warms me.
Thank you
👏❤️
This poem needed to go public and publish I did.
Your comment warms me.
Thank you
👏❤️
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22nd Sep 2023 2:30am
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24th Sep 2023 2:49am
Dear PS,
The painting is striking. Almost like stained glass. Beautiful. The poem is stand alone in terms of the brevity and directness of thought. As someone who uses 20 words when three would suffice I always admire succinctness. Great piece. H🌷
The painting is striking. Almost like stained glass. Beautiful. The poem is stand alone in terms of the brevity and directness of thought. As someone who uses 20 words when three would suffice I always admire succinctness. Great piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Never to ..
24th Sep 2023 3:22am
Dear H,
You know I'm a slice and dice kind of guy.
No gristle and no waste. Say it fast and furious and get out the door.
Appreciate the nod on the painting and poem H. My muse sure knows how to guide me ....
Thx foe the RL too !!
Cowboy 🤠
You know I'm a slice and dice kind of guy.
No gristle and no waste. Say it fast and furious and get out the door.
Appreciate the nod on the painting and poem H. My muse sure knows how to guide me ....
Thx foe the RL too !!
Cowboy 🤠
Re. Never to ..
26th Sep 2023 2:41am
Hey PS
I like how open you are in this poem. Baring yourself to
the possibility of no poetry. The uncertainty of uncharted territory.
Great painting too amigo!
I like how open you are in this poem. Baring yourself to
the possibility of no poetry. The uncertainty of uncharted territory.
Great painting too amigo!
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Re: Re. Never to ..
26th Sep 2023 3:00am
Yo Adelphina..
Sometimes I wonder if present too much bravado in poems so secretly and quietly decided to address that. A little cooling off with my muse also played a part but happy to say it's revving up again. Poems or not that relationship is solid...
Many thanks for seeing inside what I was trying to convey. Sometimes its harder to grab that brass ring but I'll never stop trying....
Appreciate your comment and glad the art did its job !!
Thx A
Sometimes I wonder if present too much bravado in poems so secretly and quietly decided to address that. A little cooling off with my muse also played a part but happy to say it's revving up again. Poems or not that relationship is solid...
Many thanks for seeing inside what I was trying to convey. Sometimes its harder to grab that brass ring but I'll never stop trying....
Appreciate your comment and glad the art did its job !!
Thx A
Re. Never to ..
27th Sep 2023 8:39pm
"Worried how existence would compete if no poems"
I felt my stomach drop when I read this.
LJ
I felt my stomach drop when I read this.
LJ
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Re: Re. Never to ..
27th Sep 2023 9:06pm
I wanted to think poems weren't necessarily needed with this connection but I found out otherwise. The writing is in indeed connective tissue.
Thx for your comment LJ
RL too.
Nice to see you again
Thx for your comment LJ
RL too.
Nice to see you again
Re. Never to ..
20th Oct 2023 1:44am
That’s the thing about poetry and how it can connect people at another level.
Nice spill sir, BiG LIKE
Nice spill sir, BiG LIKE
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20th Oct 2023 3:24am