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What a relief
A racial crime
A tragedy
The white guy
Kills three blacks
But his assault rifle
He purchased quite legally
So we're all good here.
A tragedy
The white guy
Kills three blacks
But his assault rifle
He purchased quite legally
So we're all good here.
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Re. What a relief
28th Aug 2023 4:57pm
Re: Re. What a relief
28th Aug 2023 5:45pm
Not anymore. I even wonder why they bother to show. Oh, it was racial. Otherwise the Media will not bother unless there are at least 20 bodies scattered in the mall, in the school..............
Re. What a relief
28th Aug 2023 7:58pm
I like this a lot. It kind of reads in the end like a pseudo limerick, which is powerful, contrasting the whimsical absurdity of the poem with the gravity of the subject matter.
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Re: Re. What a relief
29th Aug 2023 2:10pm
Re. What a relief
29th Aug 2023 1:27am
Re: Re. What a relief
29th Aug 2023 2:10pm
Ya. And it,s the number two item in their constitution so they'll never get rid of them.
Re. What a relief
29th Aug 2023 3:47am
Very sad. No one should be identified by their skin colour, much less be discriminated against.👍 Good write, Robert.
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Re: Re. What a relief
29th Aug 2023 2:12pm
Sad. And De Santis is not helping, rewriting history to his white liking. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Robert.
Re. What a relief
16th Sep 2023 00:39am
Sounds like another day in today's world. What's worse is that no matter what the situation, people will justify taking another life, even if their own was not even close to being in danger.
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Re: Re. What a relief
16th Sep 2023 2:20pm
And some idiot (even a governor, I think) has this AR-15 on his wall and shouts: Hey, come take my gun...............proudly defiant of course. 2A and all.