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Let's Dance
the path of regrets
shadowed by gloom
thoughts of memories
in closed books remain
walking out closing the door
no more wallow in halls
where sorrow graffiti
decorate walls
out to the vastness
of a sunny world
once more to laugh
Live love sing dance
tea, anyone...?
shadowed by gloom
thoughts of memories
in closed books remain
walking out closing the door
no more wallow in halls
where sorrow graffiti
decorate walls
out to the vastness
of a sunny world
once more to laugh
Live love sing dance
tea, anyone...?
Published 22nd Aug 2023
Author's Note
Life as i see it
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22nd Aug 2023 8:31pm
22nd Aug 2023 8:37pm
22nd Aug 2023 11:47pm
I enjoyed this poem you’ve written here. It’s good to read you are feeling good today ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Love Zazzles ☺️♥️
Love Zazzles ☺️♥️
23rd Aug 2023 1:05am
22nd Aug 2023 8:44pm
I love this warm, moving tender little poem that just feel so personal and... real.
Inspired and refreshing.... Dancing, 🎶ideed!!
Excellent poeting, dear Grace.
Inspired and refreshing.... Dancing, 🎶ideed!!
Excellent poeting, dear Grace.
22nd Aug 2023 8:54pm
22nd Aug 2023 11:06pm
hello beautiful Grace this is wonderfully written and stated
I would love to have tea with you
a very lovely write 💕
I would love to have tea with you
a very lovely write 💕
23rd Aug 2023 1:07am
Thank you dear Crimsin. 🌹For reading and commenting. Oh yes, it would be lovely to have tea with you...oo...the things we can talk about☺️
23rd Aug 2023 3:26am
24th Aug 2023 6:50am
23rd Aug 2023 4:51am
A wise person once said that those who cling to the past will always suffer. A delightful write Ms. Grace...could I please have a double shot espresso please?
🙏 Mo
🙏 Mo
24th Aug 2023 6:52am
Lovely to see you here Mo. I'd love to serve that espresso to you. I am sure we will have a delightful chat.:)
24th Aug 2023 9:03am
