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Burrowing Into Softness (a wild wish)
our hearts
in such
synchronicity
duality
in these
breath of sighs
all i know
is within
your eyes
there's no
universe
only us
burrowing
into
softness
i feel you
surround
me
hearts
exchange
barely audible beats
whispering
a true
love
in such
synchronicity
duality
in these
breath of sighs
all i know
is within
your eyes
there's no
universe
only us
burrowing
into
softness
i feel you
surround
me
hearts
exchange
barely audible beats
whispering
a true
love
Published 15th Aug 2023
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15th Aug 2023 12:55pm
It's those little whispers that usually do me in.... lol.
Love the format and the brevity of each little stanza. It's romantic minimalism that hurts so good.
Thank you for sharing your poetic prowess, dear sir.
🌹B
Love the format and the brevity of each little stanza. It's romantic minimalism that hurts so good.
Thank you for sharing your poetic prowess, dear sir.
🌹B
15th Aug 2023 1:16pm
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20th Aug 2023 11:42am
So sweet, and touching, I know that feeling and what a lovely way to start my day of reading. :)
20th Aug 2023 11:45am
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