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eternal parting
daylight teases around the corners
tentative & noncommittal
golden-hued highlights trace fingers
over every shadowed surface
as mist reluctantly settles
silently resting upon dew-kissed ground
palms pressed to fogging pane
random glimmers hold my seeking gaze
as branches sway to nature's beat
lifting & falling with the breeze
such music is beyond divine
only heard by haunted ears
like mine
hymnal open in ancient trees
whispering song of dancing leaves
directing eyes to dusky skies
where sparkling stars slowly fade
as Night gently greets her lover Day
and I bear witness
to their bittersweet parting
small wonder beloved Moon remains so late
Sun rising slowly in delay
but for these few moments
their time is brief
thus morning rises melancholy
Copyright @ Willow. All rights reserved
Published 12th Aug 2023
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12th Aug 2023 2:39am
this is so beautiful Willow you know I didn't realize it was you hello my friend it's been a long time 💕
13th Aug 2023 10:31pm
Thank you so much, Brenda. It's okay, sometimes I don't realize it's me either 😊
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12th Aug 2023 10:50pm
This is packed with lovely imager; however, this couplet is divine.
hymnal open in ancient trees
whispering song of dancing leaves
hymnal open in ancient trees
whispering song of dancing leaves
13th Aug 2023 10:33pm
Nature speaks the most ancient of languages, doesn't it? Music like no other. Thank you, Ahavati 😊
13th Aug 2023 2:17pm
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