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Twilight's slave
I was sitting in my room so alone.
Tracing the lines, each leading to the next.
Each one may start as a straight line.
But so often a room holds so many secrets.
All those years of accreted injury.
Perhaps blood can be transformed into air.
And the smell of it lingers, at least for you.
Because that was your coping mechanism.
From the crows that fed on your flesh.
They picked at it so sharply, it hurt.
Until eventually it became a need.
And the corners can definitely be brooding.
Especially when the drum beats your hips.
Drowning in the tide of it far too young.
You only exist in taunt angles, shadows.
Adamant to survive, taught not to trust.
A chitinous layer to keep out the good.
And a umbral carapace to contain the fire.
The anxiety, the fear, the passion.
And the shuddering is the innocence dying.
Such alluring music and song to some.
And when you are young the hunger begins.
For love, trust, understanding, Intimacy.
So the cycle starts... Of abscesses...
And your body becomes the world.
Perhaps it is just a worldly corpse now.
Voice of the insolvent is so rarely heard.
And my King is the one who just takes.
My laments are music to his ears.
Building parapets for protection.
These defense mechanisms fortified.
While offering so little shelter.
Corpse transported to the funeral pyre.
Only to rise again, like nothing happened.
And the hunger only grows... Twilight's slave.
Memories in the hollow of the bed.
Trails of blood, sweat, and ...
Where the scent of freshness flowed.
So many fingerprints left on the body.
Spiral into the void never to be seen.
The indent on my soul remains planted deep.
But the mattress will recover it's form.
It pretends nothing happened there.
Only the creak of stressed springs express..
Why do I continually dream of these things.
As I sit in my room, only awake in them.
I lose myself in self harm and nightmares.
Asking myself, is this what love is?
Telling myself, this is what I deserve.
But will you tell me why you need this?
Questions you could never answer out loud.
Devouring my heart and yet it still beats.
Torn atria and blood splatter tell stories.
That will never be heard, cannot be heard,
And with each fight or flight, the casing falls
It is laced with adrenaline and anxiety.
Your ink is blood, sweat, tears, and ...
It always runs off the page and into my lap.
All of these lines forming a room in my mind.
A room that only existed for a moment.
Is there a reason to dread the inevitable.
Would boredom have saved me from my fate.
So many collisions but I still survived.
At least part of me, the intense passion.
Enervating the incredible emptiness, but...
This fervid longing persists into eternity.
Lost in this labyrinth of rooms...
The absolute surety of injury continues.
And the intensity of lava as it dries,
it encases with fragments that cut deep,
Waiting for the next eruption to come.
To clasp, to breach into this channel.
And the others, they look at me. Innocent.
They can see there is something different.
Can sense the darkness left inside of me.
Feel the heat of the lava that flows there.
Scylla, transformed a little more each time.
Constantly fighting the monsters inside,
but completely submitting to the ones outside.
Tracing the lines, each leading to the next.
Each one may start as a straight line.
But so often a room holds so many secrets.
All those years of accreted injury.
Perhaps blood can be transformed into air.
And the smell of it lingers, at least for you.
Because that was your coping mechanism.
From the crows that fed on your flesh.
They picked at it so sharply, it hurt.
Until eventually it became a need.
And the corners can definitely be brooding.
Especially when the drum beats your hips.
Drowning in the tide of it far too young.
You only exist in taunt angles, shadows.
Adamant to survive, taught not to trust.
A chitinous layer to keep out the good.
And a umbral carapace to contain the fire.
The anxiety, the fear, the passion.
And the shuddering is the innocence dying.
Such alluring music and song to some.
And when you are young the hunger begins.
For love, trust, understanding, Intimacy.
So the cycle starts... Of abscesses...
And your body becomes the world.
Perhaps it is just a worldly corpse now.
Voice of the insolvent is so rarely heard.
And my King is the one who just takes.
My laments are music to his ears.
Building parapets for protection.
These defense mechanisms fortified.
While offering so little shelter.
Corpse transported to the funeral pyre.
Only to rise again, like nothing happened.
And the hunger only grows... Twilight's slave.
Memories in the hollow of the bed.
Trails of blood, sweat, and ...
Where the scent of freshness flowed.
So many fingerprints left on the body.
Spiral into the void never to be seen.
The indent on my soul remains planted deep.
But the mattress will recover it's form.
It pretends nothing happened there.
Only the creak of stressed springs express..
Why do I continually dream of these things.
As I sit in my room, only awake in them.
I lose myself in self harm and nightmares.
Asking myself, is this what love is?
Telling myself, this is what I deserve.
But will you tell me why you need this?
Questions you could never answer out loud.
Devouring my heart and yet it still beats.
Torn atria and blood splatter tell stories.
That will never be heard, cannot be heard,
And with each fight or flight, the casing falls
It is laced with adrenaline and anxiety.
Your ink is blood, sweat, tears, and ...
It always runs off the page and into my lap.
All of these lines forming a room in my mind.
A room that only existed for a moment.
Is there a reason to dread the inevitable.
Would boredom have saved me from my fate.
So many collisions but I still survived.
At least part of me, the intense passion.
Enervating the incredible emptiness, but...
This fervid longing persists into eternity.
Lost in this labyrinth of rooms...
The absolute surety of injury continues.
And the intensity of lava as it dries,
it encases with fragments that cut deep,
Waiting for the next eruption to come.
To clasp, to breach into this channel.
And the others, they look at me. Innocent.
They can see there is something different.
Can sense the darkness left inside of me.
Feel the heat of the lava that flows there.
Scylla, transformed a little more each time.
Constantly fighting the monsters inside,
but completely submitting to the ones outside.
Author's Note
There are so many secrets we keep and those are the hardest to share. Recently I have dealt with something that has brought up a lot of things in my mind. Usually I am very good at keeping things inside. They say it's cathartic to let them out and I am still not sure about that but I guess they do have a way of clawing at you and I suppose that does do damage. I prefer posting things that are more fun, exciting, or passionate and generally I am very good at hiding the pain in my writing through presenting it in different ways. But if this makes anyone feel less alone then I guess it's worth it to post. Or maybe it's me who needs to feel less alone at times keeping some things very much to myself. Not sure if I will leave this up or not, I guess time will tell.
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Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 00:35am
It was your authors note that got me. Your poem so relatable, but that…
You are not alone. Never alone.
You are not alone. Never alone.
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I am really sorry to hear that it's relatable Mary. It was very hard for me to add the note. I kept thinking about leaving it open to wider interpretation by removing some themes and not putting a note and all that sort of thing. That's what I usually do sometimes. Or making the mistake of writing something from both a negative and a positive perspective. And then I spin out in comments not sure how to respond to them. But anyway, I was shaking after I posted this so I guess it affected me more than I thought it would. And sad to say but that thought always exists that no one will believe you anyway and you just relive the anxiety all over again. And so I think, why would I do that to myself and I really don't have a good answer for that because honestly this is the last thing I want anyone thinking when they interact with me. Your comment has made me feel better about it so I suppose I will leave it up for now but it's an internal struggle that's for sure. Thank you so much for your kindness. It means a lot.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 00:38am
Great writing
Thanks for sharing some of your secrets with us
I always prefer to reveal everything I hide and talk about it to those I trust
Because revealing what we hide eases our internal suffering and gives us a little rest
Thanks for sharing some of your secrets with us
I always prefer to reveal everything I hide and talk about it to those I trust
Because revealing what we hide eases our internal suffering and gives us a little rest
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9th Aug 2023 12:28pm
I am really glad you think it is great writing. I have always been one to hold everything in. Letting it out just seems to make it even worse. It guess it feels like it might help initially but then afterword it just makes me feel super anxious. But maybe you have to try and see sometimes.
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9th Aug 2023 12:42pm
Fear is normal at first, but when you choose the right person to share your hidden feelings with, you will feel better
And feel that then remove some of the heavy burdens from within you
And feel that then remove some of the heavy burdens from within you
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9th Aug 2023 2:56pm
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9th Aug 2023 1:04am
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9th Aug 2023 12:40pm
That's so true. This is one of those things that surfaces on occasion but usually it's buried deep. Really that's where it should stay. Not real sure why I torture myself from time to time. Anyway, it's not something I let hold me back in any way. Definitely makes me anxious so not real sure why I went there.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 1:19am
There comes a time when secrets need to be released in a cathartic way so that you can bury some of the past and regain what you lost.
I say Bravo for your courage 👏
It's an amazing literary entry. I wish you peace and sanctity and never should you be alone again with this horror...
I say Bravo for your courage 👏
It's an amazing literary entry. I wish you peace and sanctity and never should you be alone again with this horror...
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9th Aug 2023 12:45pm
I suppose so, it doesn't feel cathartic at the moment. I cannot regain what I lost but I don't let it hold me back in any. I just feel like I should have left it buried and I don't feel courageous. But anyway, I love that you think it's an amazing literary entry and thank you so much for the kind words. I can use a bit of peace and sanctity at the moment.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 1:33am
Obviously, I gotta ask firstly, are you ok, lol? This is something rather akin to ABBA's last studio album 'The Visitors' from their golden era in 1981 when they were literally 'cracking up' & splitting up, right? But, yeah, I feel this write is something quite different & darker. The artwork & direction are fantastic, of course! This reads of something you can't escape from & I really feel your isolation here.
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9th Aug 2023 12:50pm
I will be okay, I never let things hold me back. Well I have to check out ABBA's last studio album so I can see how it relates. I am sure it is quite different and darker though. Glad you feel the artwork and direction are fantastic. This is something that usually stays buried deep but at times can contribute to a feeling of isolation when it does come up for whatever reason.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 4:32am
Dear K,
You’ve proffered two writes for the price of one. Your authors note is as powerful as your poem. Where to begin? You’ve bled on the page the exact emotions and thoughts that create the layer upon layer of insecurity and self loathing and self harm (in whatever context that comes in). Hiding ourselves in our bedrooms and our heads…you have completely swept the room with this piece. In so many ways I was nodding my head, wiping my tears and saying “yes, I get that” throughout this write. I think perhaps we do our best to keep things inside yet sometimes they purge in unconventional ways. It takes a boat load of courage to share this deeply and I’m quite sure you’ve help at least one person tonight (me 😊)
Incredible writing. xx H🌷
You’ve proffered two writes for the price of one. Your authors note is as powerful as your poem. Where to begin? You’ve bled on the page the exact emotions and thoughts that create the layer upon layer of insecurity and self loathing and self harm (in whatever context that comes in). Hiding ourselves in our bedrooms and our heads…you have completely swept the room with this piece. In so many ways I was nodding my head, wiping my tears and saying “yes, I get that” throughout this write. I think perhaps we do our best to keep things inside yet sometimes they purge in unconventional ways. It takes a boat load of courage to share this deeply and I’m quite sure you’ve help at least one person tonight (me 😊)
Incredible writing. xx H🌷
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9th Aug 2023 2:41pm
You always know the right things to say Honoria. Knowing that I could help someone in any way makes it worth having posted this even if I don't leave it up now. I can tell you understand about the layers and layers and how difficult those can be to overcome at times. And it's the worst thing hiding away in our heads. I do hate that it's relatable but I suppose everyone can relate with one piece of another in some way. Generally I am very very good at keeping things in through many years of experience. Sometimes sharing things on an impulse can come back to haunt us perhaps. Anyway, it did take some courage to share. I love that you think it is incredible writing. Thank you so much for kind words. It means so much to me to think that I may have helped in some way. :)
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Yes we all have secrets. It good to let them out to your mate who is willing to listen or in your poetry. Thank you for sharing. I'm here for you, if you need a friend to talk to. Keep on writing.
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9th Aug 2023 2:44pm
Yes, we all have secrets... Not really feeling I could let this out anywhere else it came out here. Still feeling uneasy and anxious about that after the fact but perhaps that will settle and turn into something else. I really appreciate knowing you are here. Thanks so much for your kind words Francisco.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 5:35am
Hey sweetie you know I'm always here even if I'm across the pond
Hugs and stuff always
Ron x
Hugs and stuff always
Ron x
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9th Aug 2023 2:55pm
Well you do know how much I love it across the pond! The UK is a special place and even more so with you there. :) And I really appreciate knowing that you are there for me and your caring Ron. Lots of hugs and stuff back at ya!
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 6:25am
There are two sides to thing. Sometimes it is necessary to share things and sometimes we keep it confined to ourselves. well still i believe that there should be such a person in life who can be our mirror. Who knows everything about us, with whom we can share everything. Because in many situations we need someone. We really feel the need...well you hav written very well!!
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9th Aug 2023 3:02pm
Yes, there are always two or even more sides to a thing. Normally I just keep things confined to myself. I am the type of person who really holds things in and does not want to burden anyone else with them or have them see me differently based on some things from the past. I do like the concept of such a person in life who can be our mirror. Hopefully they reflect the good back to us and help us see past the bad. I think we all need someone even if we feel we can't share some things with them. Thank you so much for your thoughts.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 7:40am
Dearest, Kristina❣
This is a masterpiece of vulnerability that I am so happy you shared. 🙏Please don't take it down. You had me close to tears with your account of pain and loneliness. Your imagery poignantly and so vividly gives life to your words. I truly identified with this beautifully worded passage,
"The indent on my soul remains planted deep.
But the mattress will recover it's form.
It pretends nothing happened there."
I am sad that you have to pass through dark trials but I know you will be blessed with brighter days🌞
Bravissima güzel tanrıça şair❣🌹
This is a masterpiece of vulnerability that I am so happy you shared. 🙏Please don't take it down. You had me close to tears with your account of pain and loneliness. Your imagery poignantly and so vividly gives life to your words. I truly identified with this beautifully worded passage,
"The indent on my soul remains planted deep.
But the mattress will recover it's form.
It pretends nothing happened there."
I am sad that you have to pass through dark trials but I know you will be blessed with brighter days🌞
Bravissima güzel tanrıça şair❣🌹
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9th Aug 2023 3:12pm
'A masterpiece of vulnerability' you always have a way with words GW. I appreciate so much that you could truly feel it. I can't promise I will leave it up as I am still struggling with it for whatever reason but I have had multiple people tell me to so I will take that into consideration I suppose. I can tell you were really able to connect with the feelings of pain and loneliness. There was a lot of confusion, anxiety, and fear during that time for so many reasons. Extremely vulnerable and very much a 'pleaser' dealing with incredibly significant changes as well. I am glad the imagery was able to give life to my words. I have was presented many trials early in life but they have made me stronger and I don't dwell on it. Instead I use my intense passion to always look forward to brighter days. :) Thanks so much for your kind words.
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10th Aug 2023 00:07am
I neglected to mention your erudition in the piece. Your sexy (not sex sexy but inteligent sexy) 😉 word usage and variety is a total turn-on. I had to look up three😂 I love having to research language it broadens my own vocabulary. ❤
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10th Aug 2023 1:32am
Erudition, what a great word! ;) Well I love being intelligent sexy but sex sexy is good too. :p Variety is a total turn-on. I love that you had to look up three. That surprises me... You have such an amazing vocabulary so I feel pretty good about that.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 10:05am
You are not alone. And we are many things. The good the bad, but it all makes us who we are. I'm always here for you my friend. Those feelings don't have to be fought alone.
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9th Aug 2023 3:18pm
It's always good to hear and know we are not alone. Often you can still feel alone even with people around you especially when you don't want to share some things. But you are so right, the good and the bad all make us who we are. And I know that through perseverance I have become a stronger person from all living through all of the bad. I will always focus on being a better person and living a passionate life. Thank you so much for being there and your kind words DC.
Re. Twilight's slave
9th Aug 2023 1:22pm
thank you for sharing the frame work of that room
for a moment we might step inside
reading, digesting
imagery, mounted descriptions
encapsuled deep within your lines.
your finger as it traces
a part of you, you've shown
through understanding, we've learned.
a way you have with words.
for a moment we might step inside
reading, digesting
imagery, mounted descriptions
encapsuled deep within your lines.
your finger as it traces
a part of you, you've shown
through understanding, we've learned.
a way you have with words.
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9th Aug 2023 3:33pm
There are so many rooms and some are very difficult and dangerous to get to. But sometimes we can offer a glimpse into the dark labyrinth. So many more secrets and details are still buried within. But you can take that step into the doorway and start to see that framework through the imagery and descriptions encapsulated very deep within in the lines. Seeing a bit more a part that normally never sees the light of day. And it means a lot to me that you think I have a way with words Mystic. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Re. Twilight's slave
10th Aug 2023 00:47am
This is a brave and vulnerable write, Kx. Your intelligence oozes through every line, along with the pain. If you do take it down, I'm really glad I got to read it, because I think it's my favourite thing I've read by you.
I know how scary it is to share a different, deeper facet of yourself when your preference is to keep things fun & playful. But believe me when I tell you, we love all the sides of you. Share whatever you must to help you process. It's scary... but it does help. As many people here have already said, you're not alone. You're so, so strong, but you're also allowed to just be sensitive and hurt sometimes. We'll hold space for you.
Sending you hugs, beautiful one. 💕 Thank you for trusting us with your heart.
❤️k
I know how scary it is to share a different, deeper facet of yourself when your preference is to keep things fun & playful. But believe me when I tell you, we love all the sides of you. Share whatever you must to help you process. It's scary... but it does help. As many people here have already said, you're not alone. You're so, so strong, but you're also allowed to just be sensitive and hurt sometimes. We'll hold space for you.
Sending you hugs, beautiful one. 💕 Thank you for trusting us with your heart.
❤️k
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You certainly know how to leave me at a loss for words BT. I have to admit there were certain people that I thought might make this worthwhile to post in some way. That perhaps it would help me somehow, and you were one of those people. I remember a previous comment on one that touched on this. So I am glad you had the opportunity to read it and that it was meaningful to you. I really appreciate you saying the intelligence oozes; that definitely makes me feel good that you see me that way.
It is scary to share something like this for me. I was actually feeling pretty bad about it to be honest but you really helped me with that. So I want you to know that. 'we love all the sides of you', what more could someone ever hope to hear? So maybe it does help, but that's because of people like you and others who have said such kind and supportive things. I prefer to be strong but it's so nice to know that I can be sensitive and hurt sometimes because I am a very sensitive person. So thank you for holding space for me.
Thank you so much for the hugs and your kindness. It really does mean so much to me. ❤️
It is scary to share something like this for me. I was actually feeling pretty bad about it to be honest but you really helped me with that. So I want you to know that. 'we love all the sides of you', what more could someone ever hope to hear? So maybe it does help, but that's because of people like you and others who have said such kind and supportive things. I prefer to be strong but it's so nice to know that I can be sensitive and hurt sometimes because I am a very sensitive person. So thank you for holding space for me.
Thank you so much for the hugs and your kindness. It really does mean so much to me. ❤️
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Hi Kristina
This isn't easy to do. It's like a purging of the soul.
Having to go war with your past and emotions just to remind yourself you survived.
Putting it down on paper had to be challenging. Hang in there!
This is a great write and shows you're drive to grow towards healing.
It might feel that way but I'm rooting for ya:)
This isn't easy to do. It's like a purging of the soul.
Having to go war with your past and emotions just to remind yourself you survived.
Putting it down on paper had to be challenging. Hang in there!
This is a great write and shows you're drive to grow towards healing.
It might feel that way but I'm rooting for ya:)
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11th Aug 2023 3:19pm
That's so true, it isn't easy to do. That vulnerability has a way of re-surfacing and the anxiety and you don't realize how strong the anxiety will be again just touching on something. It is a war, something that should stay buried but somehow finds a way to rise up again. Most things I have written on this will never see the light of day. I will definitely hang in there. Whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger and I choose to be stronger. But healing does take time and some things come out in unexpected ways on occasion even when you keep them compartmentalized and hidden away deep. Thanks for rooting for me. :) I really appreciate that a lot.
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11th Aug 2023 3:50pm
It is ,indeed cathartic to let spill, if we are willing to heal, and when the poison is leaking out, then purged are the hearts in pain,,
Very good poetry but the past should not affect the present that is being built for a good future, stay happy my friend
Very good poetry but the past should not affect the present that is being built for a good future, stay happy my friend
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11th Aug 2023 4:56pm
Hi poeticdelight. It's so important to heal and try to get rid of that poison when it does flow trying to purge the heart of pain. I am really glad you thought it was very good poetry. I think the past often affects the present in ways we can struggle with or often don't see. But we can learn from the past to make a better future. It's important to gain strength and determination from our trials. Thank you so much for your kindness. I really appreciate it.
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12th Aug 2023 3:38pm
Even though we dealt with this in PMs, I will repeat some here.
We can't control the actions around us or even involving us most times. Shit happens. It sucks. We get beat down by too much.
But, fuck that. Shine your light. We decide to be an earthly star or not. So be one. Even those who wish us harm or misfortune, incinerate them with your light. That's all you have to do really. Outshine them. They roll around in ashes. Everything for them is bitter.
Stay above it, even if only your soul rises above it for now.
You'll see. Shit doesn't stick to our auras. So shine .
We can't control the actions around us or even involving us most times. Shit happens. It sucks. We get beat down by too much.
But, fuck that. Shine your light. We decide to be an earthly star or not. So be one. Even those who wish us harm or misfortune, incinerate them with your light. That's all you have to do really. Outshine them. They roll around in ashes. Everything for them is bitter.
Stay above it, even if only your soul rises above it for now.
You'll see. Shit doesn't stick to our auras. So shine .
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12th Aug 2023 10:32pm
It's always great to hear your thoughts Styx. And some things are worth repeating, perhaps it takes a moment to sink in. ;)
That is very true, there is so much we cannot control; I know that all to well. It's a lesson I have been taught so many times. And yes life can beat you down but I have never given up no matter what comes my way. The things that don't kill us make us stronger. I really appreciate the strong message to shine. I try to do that and be an inspiration in whatever way I can. I have dealt with something recently that I have not shared here but it's part of what brought up certain things in my mind again. Sharing this type of writing is very personal though and something I normally wouldn't do this openly but I suppose it needed to go somewhere in this instance for whatever reason. I usually regret posting openly very personal things but ho hum perhaps it's part of growing or whatever. But still in regards to those who wish us harm or misfortune, I choose not to hate them. Hate is an emotion that just consumes you and holds you back. I will always try to shine for those who can appreciate it and avoid those who want to incinerate me with their negativity. I have more than enough challenges to deal with without that. I really appreciate your confidence, support, and encouragement in helping me want to shine.
That is very true, there is so much we cannot control; I know that all to well. It's a lesson I have been taught so many times. And yes life can beat you down but I have never given up no matter what comes my way. The things that don't kill us make us stronger. I really appreciate the strong message to shine. I try to do that and be an inspiration in whatever way I can. I have dealt with something recently that I have not shared here but it's part of what brought up certain things in my mind again. Sharing this type of writing is very personal though and something I normally wouldn't do this openly but I suppose it needed to go somewhere in this instance for whatever reason. I usually regret posting openly very personal things but ho hum perhaps it's part of growing or whatever. But still in regards to those who wish us harm or misfortune, I choose not to hate them. Hate is an emotion that just consumes you and holds you back. I will always try to shine for those who can appreciate it and avoid those who want to incinerate me with their negativity. I have more than enough challenges to deal with without that. I really appreciate your confidence, support, and encouragement in helping me want to shine.
Re. Twilight's slave
13th Aug 2023 1:44am
Wow! This is magnificent. I don't think I can say anything more. If it possible for something positive to bloom out of a raw wound, that hope seems to be holding on by a sliver As usual songs come to mind:
The Police, "King Of Pain and Mr.Mister, "Tangent Tears". Admittedly the connection to the latter is less obvious ----
"Through all the ragged truth, you left one poignant lie
A nice series of words for goodbye
Who's playing on your team, he has a certain flair
'Cos I don't see you around anywhere
I cry when you're not here, I keep cryin' tangent tears, oh
Ooh yeah, cryin' tangent tears
I'm stuck on interphase, my heart does not forget
Checking out at this point is no sweat
Chill factor number nine, you made my heart go blind
You act so cold but you still look so fine"
The Police, "King Of Pain and Mr.Mister, "Tangent Tears". Admittedly the connection to the latter is less obvious ----
"Through all the ragged truth, you left one poignant lie
A nice series of words for goodbye
Who's playing on your team, he has a certain flair
'Cos I don't see you around anywhere
I cry when you're not here, I keep cryin' tangent tears, oh
Ooh yeah, cryin' tangent tears
I'm stuck on interphase, my heart does not forget
Checking out at this point is no sweat
Chill factor number nine, you made my heart go blind
You act so cold but you still look so fine"
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13th Aug 2023 2:19am
You said so much more Jazz! I can only hope that something positive can come out of a raw wound because I always want to be something positive. This is a part of me and always will be no matter how much I bury it. And so it's important to draw strength, determination, and passion from those things that were taken from me. All of the confusion, fear, anxiety, and the secrets that have been guarded so tightly. But still there is hope, strength, and passion to be gained from that experience or at least that how I choose to see it. As always, I love how quickly you are able to connect emotion with songs. I look forward to listening to each of the songs and fully taking in the depth of the connections that lie there. Less obvious is often the most meaningful so perhaps the latter will be the most important. I definitely see so much in the verses you shared. You do have a wonderful mind and I really love how you share that with us here. :)
Re: Re. Twilight's slave
15th Aug 2023 4:27pm
Well the Police song is more accessible because those three guys hit that point in popularity where everyone was inquiring about the songs. Sting wrote that at a time where they seemingly had it all, but that "all" was not all that was hoped. Sting was in a marriage that was coming apart, as was the bond with the band. In that way a common element found with the Beatles with Let It Be and Abbey Road.
Mr.Mister didn't last as long and I don't know much about the impetus for the lyrics. It does suggest a relationship gone wrong because of some character flaws though not on parr with your what you went through.
Mr.Mister didn't last as long and I don't know much about the impetus for the lyrics. It does suggest a relationship gone wrong because of some character flaws though not on parr with your what you went through.
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Re. Twilight's slave
14th Aug 2023 00:52am
So relatable KX… so much of this resonates with me… I have lived a beautiful ugliness… great write…
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Re: Re. Twilight's slave
14th Aug 2023 3:05pm
Sorry to hear that it's relatable LDF. I know from previous comments regarding this you have also gone through some very difficult things so you have a deeper understanding from that perspective. It's interesting the way you said what you did and that resonates as well. Anyway, you are beautiful and I truly hope you know that despite the trials. Thank you so much for saying it's a great write, I really appreciate your thoughts so much.
Re. Twilight's slave
21st Aug 2023 4:06am
I always thought it takes courage to come in to a public forum and share things from the past, especially when some have suffered traumatic events. The healing process is a long road and writing seems to help many of us understand it and grow. You've given us a piece of you, aside from the usual themes that you like to share, this part of you gives us a more profound sense of Kristina, without going too much into detail.
Thank you for sharing, for being honest about your feelings and your journey.
W
Thank you for sharing, for being honest about your feelings and your journey.
W
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Re: Re. Twilight's slave
21st Aug 2023 2:06pm
It definitely takes courage and perhaps some lapse of judgement too. Some traumatic events or more so periods in time are even more difficult. Healing is a very long road and it's up to us to stay on the road that leads to a better place which can be very difficult as well. Often there are road blocks or we find ourselves taking detours back along treacherous routes. Perhaps we are looking for them in an effort to find something we lost. But it's important to try and understand so we can grow. It's very hard to get into detail on this, I doubt I ever will. This was an incredibly hard period of time for many reasons. When you experience trauma during key formative years it will infiltrates every fiber of your being. But anyway... Thank you for sharing in my journey Wally. I appreciate your thoughtful feedback and support so much.
Re. Twilight's slave
6th Nov 2023 9:41pm
You finally found your wings. My god, they're so beautiful!
Coming to earth in mortal from means leaving them behind, sadly many fail to reclaim them. The greatest among those who suffer this game we call life are those who learn the secret of reclaimation prior to the final act, and spread them wide as an inspiration to all blessed with a view to see them.
Spread those wings babe, make the angels jealous and be proud of your accomplishments.
Xxx
Coming to earth in mortal from means leaving them behind, sadly many fail to reclaim them. The greatest among those who suffer this game we call life are those who learn the secret of reclaimation prior to the final act, and spread them wide as an inspiration to all blessed with a view to see them.
Spread those wings babe, make the angels jealous and be proud of your accomplishments.
Xxx
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Re: Re. Twilight's slave
7th Nov 2023 3:11pm
What a beautiful and inspirational comment. I can't say I have found my wings but I am trying. :) I agree earth strips us of our wings and we have to learn how to fly, or dye trying I suppose. And I truly believe that wisdom comes from suffering. Those that suffer the most gain a deeper
understanding of losing those wings and what it means to reclaim them. Each of us are truly blessed to be able to see the wings of another and help them rise to their potential too. "Spread those wings babe, make the angels jealous and be proud of your accomplishments". You definitely have a way with words. ;) There is so much to that statement. Thanks again for such a beautiful comment, it touched me.
understanding of losing those wings and what it means to reclaim them. Each of us are truly blessed to be able to see the wings of another and help them rise to their potential too. "Spread those wings babe, make the angels jealous and be proud of your accomplishments". You definitely have a way with words. ;) There is so much to that statement. Thanks again for such a beautiful comment, it touched me.
Re. Twilight's slave
4th May 2024 3:27am
Wow! What a write and what a read. I know im super late to this but I wanted to say that I recognize the courage it takes to not only open up like this in a public space, but to open up boxes that have been sealed and purposely lost under a huge pile of anything and everything you can find to bury them.
I have struggled my whole life with a darkness that lives in me. Voices in my head that torment me. Feelings of worthlessness, fear of abandonment, dissociation, self sabotage all have been a part of my life for as long as I can remember. It has systematically destroyed everything good I have ever had in my life. Romantic relationships, relationships with family and even my children have suffererd and friendships as well. Im cold, brooding, untrusting, unable to open up, unable to accept love or kindness, unable to let anyone get close or to feel emotions other than negative ones.
At the end of 2022 my wife decided that 18 years was long enough to live with a person like me and the way my darkness loomed over our household and every part of all of our lives. I was completely devastated. I went against everything in me and fought so hard to not be "me" because I had all I ever wanted. I had a family. I had unconditional love or so I thought. My best try wasnt good enough. I couldnt hide who I was and my fucked up view of life. My darkness blotted out her light. It blotted out my childrens light. She had to make a choice and even though it destroyed me inside, I know it was the right choice. Honestly, she should have done it sooner and prevented some of the damage.
For a few months I was really fucking lost. Ive always kind of been lost but this time was different. I was despondent. All I wanted to do was die. I came close so many times to ending it. So many times with a gun to my head. So close to pulling the trigger. But I was a coward. Ive always been a coward. I was too afraid that whatever comes after this life could be worse. That thought terrifies me. Imagining something worse than what I am currently living. Then, someone came into my life, by total chance. Someone I knew but had never really talked to much or got to know that well. She was just going through a divorce herself and had this strength that was magnetic. I so wished I could be like her instead of a fucking broken little bitch.
We started talking daily and she helped me to realize that what I was experiencing was due to things that were repressed. Things I stored away in a box and hid, never to be returned to. She wanted me to unpack those things. The thought of doing that absolutely and completely terrified me. The thought of going back to a place that I hadnt been since I was a child. A place I never wanted to return to. It was not easy at all. She was very patient and little by little I started unpacking things and once I did, there was stuff in there that I honestly didnt even remember. There was a catharsis that was there to a degree but it was so overwhelming. The emotions, the feelings that I had turned off long ago were now suddenly flipped back on. I didnt know what to do with these emotions. It was torture. I thought to myself, how the fuck do people live like this? Feeling all these emotions. But, I tried my best to stick with it and keep unpacking all this shit.
For the first time in my life, I began to understand why I am the way I am. What caused me to be this way. The things I had to do as a young child in order to cope. They are what set the foundation for this fucked up person I am now. That ia all I can really say that Ingot out of it. I dont know that it really helped. I mean, I rememebr a lot of shit and maybe I know why or how I ended up this way, but I'm still fucked up. I still dont know how to fix it. In some ways, I think I may be more fucked up now because I remember all these things that were never supposed to be remembered. Me and the girl have since stopped talking. I fucked up and caught feelings for her Nd it made it difficult for me to open up once I cared in that way about what her opinion of me was. Now, I have gone back to shutting down and dissociation again. I write to try to ease some of the frustration. I write from memory not from how I feel now. Right now Im numb. I still want to die but its beacuse my life just feels pointless going through every moment of every day feeling nothing at all.
I just wanted to share that with you after reading this write and especially after reading the comments and in particular where you said you didnt know if you actually felt any better after opening up like this. I certainly relate and although its whatever now, since I have flipped the switch to off again, I wished I hadnt dredged all that shit up in that time period where my emotions were running like a dam had collapsed. Thank you for sharing. I know what that took out of you and you have so much of my respect.
I have struggled my whole life with a darkness that lives in me. Voices in my head that torment me. Feelings of worthlessness, fear of abandonment, dissociation, self sabotage all have been a part of my life for as long as I can remember. It has systematically destroyed everything good I have ever had in my life. Romantic relationships, relationships with family and even my children have suffererd and friendships as well. Im cold, brooding, untrusting, unable to open up, unable to accept love or kindness, unable to let anyone get close or to feel emotions other than negative ones.
At the end of 2022 my wife decided that 18 years was long enough to live with a person like me and the way my darkness loomed over our household and every part of all of our lives. I was completely devastated. I went against everything in me and fought so hard to not be "me" because I had all I ever wanted. I had a family. I had unconditional love or so I thought. My best try wasnt good enough. I couldnt hide who I was and my fucked up view of life. My darkness blotted out her light. It blotted out my childrens light. She had to make a choice and even though it destroyed me inside, I know it was the right choice. Honestly, she should have done it sooner and prevented some of the damage.
For a few months I was really fucking lost. Ive always kind of been lost but this time was different. I was despondent. All I wanted to do was die. I came close so many times to ending it. So many times with a gun to my head. So close to pulling the trigger. But I was a coward. Ive always been a coward. I was too afraid that whatever comes after this life could be worse. That thought terrifies me. Imagining something worse than what I am currently living. Then, someone came into my life, by total chance. Someone I knew but had never really talked to much or got to know that well. She was just going through a divorce herself and had this strength that was magnetic. I so wished I could be like her instead of a fucking broken little bitch.
We started talking daily and she helped me to realize that what I was experiencing was due to things that were repressed. Things I stored away in a box and hid, never to be returned to. She wanted me to unpack those things. The thought of doing that absolutely and completely terrified me. The thought of going back to a place that I hadnt been since I was a child. A place I never wanted to return to. It was not easy at all. She was very patient and little by little I started unpacking things and once I did, there was stuff in there that I honestly didnt even remember. There was a catharsis that was there to a degree but it was so overwhelming. The emotions, the feelings that I had turned off long ago were now suddenly flipped back on. I didnt know what to do with these emotions. It was torture. I thought to myself, how the fuck do people live like this? Feeling all these emotions. But, I tried my best to stick with it and keep unpacking all this shit.
For the first time in my life, I began to understand why I am the way I am. What caused me to be this way. The things I had to do as a young child in order to cope. They are what set the foundation for this fucked up person I am now. That ia all I can really say that Ingot out of it. I dont know that it really helped. I mean, I rememebr a lot of shit and maybe I know why or how I ended up this way, but I'm still fucked up. I still dont know how to fix it. In some ways, I think I may be more fucked up now because I remember all these things that were never supposed to be remembered. Me and the girl have since stopped talking. I fucked up and caught feelings for her Nd it made it difficult for me to open up once I cared in that way about what her opinion of me was. Now, I have gone back to shutting down and dissociation again. I write to try to ease some of the frustration. I write from memory not from how I feel now. Right now Im numb. I still want to die but its beacuse my life just feels pointless going through every moment of every day feeling nothing at all.
I just wanted to share that with you after reading this write and especially after reading the comments and in particular where you said you didnt know if you actually felt any better after opening up like this. I certainly relate and although its whatever now, since I have flipped the switch to off again, I wished I hadnt dredged all that shit up in that time period where my emotions were running like a dam had collapsed. Thank you for sharing. I know what that took out of you and you have so much of my respect.
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Re: Re. Twilight's slave
5th May 2024 6:13pm
I did not feel I could appropriately respond in comments so I sent my response in PM. Thank you for leaving such detailed thoughts and sharing so much of yourself with me. And always know that living is not cowardly, it's stopping living that is cowardly. PLEASE don't do that to the people that love you and all the people who will love you in the future. Don't be afraid to seek help. It doesn't make you weak. I know what it's like to suffer in silence.