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Melancholy
A very dark and gloomy day
Boring, yes, langweilig
As I sit by the window
So bored, suffering from
The total tedium vitaie of Seneca
Hesse and Wilde
So bored, trying to count the number of raindrops
But are they tears of a greek goddess
Or the last drops of blood
Leaving a tired body?
Boring, yes, langweilig
As I sit by the window
So bored, suffering from
The total tedium vitaie of Seneca
Hesse and Wilde
So bored, trying to count the number of raindrops
But are they tears of a greek goddess
Or the last drops of blood
Leaving a tired body?
Published 8th Aug 2023
| Edited 9th Aug 2023
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8th Aug 2023 11:44pm
9th Aug 2023 2:09pm
10th Aug 2023 6:42pm
11th Aug 2023 2:15pm
Much appreciated, as always. Sometimes (rarely) lightning strikes. Regards, Robert.
11th Aug 2023 2:35pm
15th Aug 2023 2:19pm
I love your poem. It made me think of rainy days.:) a feeling of being in a cocoon of isolation.
15th Aug 2023 2:20pm
21st Aug 2023 3:55am
I like your take on this, reflective with some great story telling using mythology.
Well done sir.
Well done sir.
21st Aug 2023 5:26pm
