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a book
. . . To be precisely placed ‘pon your shelf:
between, “Great Expectations and “Gone with the Wind,”
a best seller, “The Notebook, against the latest version of “Vogue”
Take a look
and touch me
Trace verbs *like braille*
observing
each chapter,
I long to be,
a book . . .
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between, “Great Expectations and “Gone with the Wind,”
a best seller, “The Notebook, against the latest version of “Vogue”
Take a look
and touch me
Trace verbs *like braille*
observing
each chapter,
I long to be,
a book . . .
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Published 5th Aug 2023
Author's Note
* scribbling *
- - and aching for your touch
- - and aching for your touch
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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5th Aug 2023 7:57pm
"Take a look and touch me"
Such a beautiful command. Ever man love to hear such words from his beloved . I can visualise the stripping moments and his hand over her breast .
He gaze the beauty of flesh and the texture of her nipples and savor with her consent ..
Such a beautiful command. Ever man love to hear such words from his beloved . I can visualise the stripping moments and his hand over her breast .
He gaze the beauty of flesh and the texture of her nipples and savor with her consent ..
6th Aug 2023 3:48am
Being a book would be an exciting adventure.
Fingertips tracing every syllable and verb.
Thank you, sharad. Your comment is appreciated.
Fingertips tracing every syllable and verb.
Thank you, sharad. Your comment is appreciated.
5th Aug 2023 10:53pm
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9th Aug 2023 4:13am
Dear B,
I enjoyed the sensuality of this poem. Holding a book and a certain someone can bring pleasure in equal measure. Fantastic metaphor. H🌷
I enjoyed the sensuality of this poem. Holding a book and a certain someone can bring pleasure in equal measure. Fantastic metaphor. H🌷
10th Aug 2023 3:15am
Dear Honoria, yes, indeed it can; and that's the feeling within that I'm sharing. Thank you for your lovely and poetic comment. 🌸
10th Aug 2023 00:46am
GREAT !
" Take a look ... and touch me... "
The metaphor and the message is prefectly clear.
... ... ...
" Take a look ... and touch me... "
The metaphor and the message is prefectly clear.
... ... ...
10th Aug 2023 3:23am
Hi Marks,
Yes, I long to be . . . a book.
To be held, while fingers trace my spine.
Thank you. ☺️
Yes, I long to be . . . a book.
To be held, while fingers trace my spine.
Thank you. ☺️
11th Aug 2023 11:48pm
You're welcome, bcharmed.
... 😍👍
Sophisticated readers who love writing skills.
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... 😍👍
Sophisticated readers who love writing skills.
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12th Aug 2023 5:23am
You're a woman with hungry eyes who wants to be property touched. Keep on writing.
13th Aug 2023 2:16am
Thank you, Francisco. Always longing for such, a delicate, yet playful touch.
12th Aug 2023 7:44am
Hoi hoi
What a truly delightful write
O yes, this resonates deeply
For years I’ve been a braille volunteer
I practised with love, choose me
Kind regards, Gus
What a truly delightful write
O yes, this resonates deeply
For years I’ve been a braille volunteer
I practised with love, choose me
Kind regards, Gus
13th Aug 2023 2:23am
Gus,
Words long to be touched, with every line traced.
Your thoughts bring a smile. : )
Thank you.
Words long to be touched, with every line traced.
Your thoughts bring a smile. : )
Thank you.
13th Aug 2023 10:27am
Oh yes, I meant the words. I am really sorry if you have thought I’m after your bum.
I have to be clearer, rereading what I typed.
Have a marvellous Sunday!
Kind regards, Gus
I have to be clearer, rereading what I typed.
Have a marvellous Sunday!
Kind regards, Gus
15th Aug 2023 2:18am
Oh, I didn't think that at all. No need to apologize.
Your 'thoughts' are beautiful and you've stated them clearly. : )
Thank you for your kind words and wishes.
Enjoy your week.
Your 'thoughts' are beautiful and you've stated them clearly. : )
Thank you for your kind words and wishes.
Enjoy your week.
31st Aug 2023 10:52pm
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4th Sep 2023 2:54am
This is a powerful piece of writing. The book is red and hot in these bodies.
4th Sep 2023 3:04am
Thank you, MP.
The thought of fingers caressing my paragraphs, is very exciting, indeed. ☺️
The thought of fingers caressing my paragraphs, is very exciting, indeed. ☺️
4th Sep 2023 3:07am
Yes, I can imagine how you do that
Maybe you unfollowed me
But I always wait for your writings
Maybe you unfollowed me
But I always wait for your writings
5th Sep 2023 1:00am
Suddenly the verse “Great Expectations and “Gone with the Wind,”...
reminds me *Great Expectations* ,an American film,... a dark and almost unknowable USA
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Expectations_(1998_film)
reminds me *Great Expectations* ,an American film,... a dark and almost unknowable USA
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Expectations_(1998_film)
5th Sep 2023 1:16am
Yes, I see what you mean. Such an unexpected, yet thrilling take on my words.
Thank you, Marks ! 😊
Thank you, Marks ! 😊
6th Sep 2023 1:02am
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30th Sep 2023 1:25am
Oh, my ! Placing a quote from Rumi upon a poem of mine and saying it fits around my thoughts, is the best comment and compliment ever.
I'm in complete awe.
Thank you, CyprianVanDyke.
My heart is smiling. ❤️
I'm in complete awe.
Thank you, CyprianVanDyke.
My heart is smiling. ❤️
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4th Oct 2023 7:23pm
I would like to touch all night and day long. You will be feel good afterwards. Keep on writing.
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2024 4:02am
Dreamy words throughout this, and the metaphor fits so well. To be read, touched, and completed is everyone's dream when the right one comes along. Having each chapter of life filled by the one you want. That's got to be a best seller.
13th Jan 2024 2:51am
I'm smiling with you saying this is dreamy, and a best seller. My thoughts within . . .
You read me ' like a book '. Meaning: That's exactly what I want, to be touched, while each chapter in life is fulfilled.
My heart is fluttering.
You read me ' like a book '. Meaning: That's exactly what I want, to be touched, while each chapter in life is fulfilled.
My heart is fluttering.
19th Jan 2024 10:38pm
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23rd Mar 2024 2:32am
It will be a long night of me reading you a romance book while giving orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
24th Mar 2024 2:17am
Thank you Francisco, for your lovely comment. Your thoughts are beautiful, romantic and sensual. My best to you.
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