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Captivated
Without realization, eyes flutter in surprise,
perhaps a simple reaction of anticipation - -
of it all
Do I believe in the unbelievable,
like petals after the fall ?
“I don’t, I do.”
I question it all
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Stated clearly,
within
curves of curiosity,
of simply me
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Without hesitation, but with realization,
I whisper you
. . In this destination,
is it possible to be, Captivated ?
Author's Note
Simple thoughts from the heart
Just a little scribble
Just a little scribble
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 3:45am
Dear, Brandy❣ I am captivated by your words. I love the curves of curiosity. And questioning all.
Wonderful poem...Bavissima poetry goddess🌺
Wonderful poem...Bavissima poetry goddess🌺
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Re: Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 4:15am
Dear, GW. Your kind words bring a smile. Thank you for your lovely comment, and for placing this on your Reading List.
I'm blushing, with you saying I'm a "goddess". 😊
I'm blushing, with you saying I'm a "goddess". 😊
Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 4:49am
That was poetry of a goddess. 😊
Wow! You worded that with such delicate precision
I was swept away.
I loved....like petals after fall.
Stunning.
Wow! You worded that with such delicate precision
I was swept away.
I loved....like petals after fall.
Stunning.
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Re: Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 7:11pm
So kind of you to say, Debbie. 🙂
Having the title of a poetry goddess, leaves me in awe. (I'm just me).
Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within.
When petals fall, I am reminded to embrace the beauty.
You and your kind words are appreciated.
My best to you. 🌺
Having the title of a poetry goddess, leaves me in awe. (I'm just me).
Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within.
When petals fall, I am reminded to embrace the beauty.
You and your kind words are appreciated.
My best to you. 🌺
Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 5:11am
I'm intrigued by these lovely words. Love is in the air. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 7:26pm
You're intrigued. Thank you, Francisco. So kind of you to say that my words are fascinating. Your thoughts are appreciated. 🙂
Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 6:32am
Dear B,
This read rather like a soft whisper to me. I enjoyed the randomness of thought and the conclusion of being captivated. Elegantly sensual. Lovely write. H🌷
This read rather like a soft whisper to me. I enjoyed the randomness of thought and the conclusion of being captivated. Elegantly sensual. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 7:49pm
Honoria,
Thank for you saying this reminds you of a soft whisper. (That's the idea).
Being captivated in these moments, in this reality- the heart is longing to know.
This is filled with soft sensuality. Your kind words are appreciated. 🌺
Thank for you saying this reminds you of a soft whisper. (That's the idea).
Being captivated in these moments, in this reality- the heart is longing to know.
This is filled with soft sensuality. Your kind words are appreciated. 🌺
Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 4:08pm
A different kind of piece, perhaps "just a scribble" but worth the read 🌼
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Re: Re. Captivated
27th May 2023 7:54pm
Re. Captivated
28th May 2023 3:05pm
Nice work.
Nothing is impossible...
Just like a miracle, it could be improbable...
Just like a thesis, it is unlikely to hold true...
But the unbelievable is always captivating, because unbelievable or not, it happens...
... ... ...
Nothing is impossible...
Just like a miracle, it could be improbable...
Just like a thesis, it is unlikely to hold true...
But the unbelievable is always captivating, because unbelievable or not, it happens...
... ... ...
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Re: Re. Captivated
29th May 2023 2:02am
Marks,
Your comment is beyond beautiful.
Soft, delicate and poetic are your thoughts.
Yes, anything is possible.
You have 'me' captivated with your words.
I'm in complete awe. ❤️
Your comment is beyond beautiful.
Soft, delicate and poetic are your thoughts.
Yes, anything is possible.
You have 'me' captivated with your words.
I'm in complete awe. ❤️
Re: Re. Captivated
31st May 2023 1:03am
Well,... ...
thank you for your reply, bcharmed,...
... it is almost a cumpliment.
thank you for your reply, bcharmed,...
... it is almost a cumpliment.
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Re. Captivated
2nd Jun 2023 3:50am
Woow this great and philosophical.... A little scribbled but I enjoy reading it 4 times...you deserve an👏
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Re: Re. Captivated
Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you, OncleNyck. I appreciate you saying this is "philosophical." I'm in complete awe.
So sweet of you to read it 4 times.
Your applause is received with a soft smile. 😊
So sweet of you to read it 4 times.
Your applause is received with a soft smile. 😊
Re. Captivated
5th Jun 2023 3:30am
Re: Re. Captivated
12th Jun 2023 3:38am
Thank you, Krystal. So kind of you to say. I appreciate your lovely comment. 🌺
Re. Captivated
6th Aug 2023 11:01pm
I enjoy your work. Just not vey good at commenting. Consider my comments a 1000 words.
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Re: Re. Captivated
7th Aug 2023 1:13am
I appreciate you reading my work, adagio. Your comment is perfect. : ) A thousand words flow softly along the page.
Re. Captivated
12th Aug 2023 1:10pm
A little scribble with potential of leading to a much longer romantic tale.
Your captivation, questioning, curiosity, romance and emotions all fine facets of good poetry.
Your captivation, questioning, curiosity, romance and emotions all fine facets of good poetry.
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Re: Re. Captivated
13th Aug 2023 2:38am
Leo, emotions cause the heart to become uncertain, but there's reassurance deep within. Captivated, indeed !
Such a wonderful thing to say, about my poetry.
Thank you.
Such a wonderful thing to say, about my poetry.
Thank you.
Re. Captivated
23rd Mar 2024 2:24am
This piece of poetry evokes a sense of introspection and contemplation. The imagery of eyes fluttering in surprise and the questioning of belief in the unbelievable set a tone of uncertainty and curiosity. The repetition of phrases like "I don't, I do" emphasizes the internal conflict and complexity of human thought.
The juxtaposition of hesitation and realization adds depth to the exploration of one's beliefs and perceptions. The question posed, "In this destination, is it possible to be Captivated?" suggests a longing for connection and wonderment amidst the uncertainties of life.
Overall, the poem invites the reader to reflect on their own beliefs, doubts, and the possibility of finding fascination and captivation in the midst of questioning and uncertainty.
The juxtaposition of hesitation and realization adds depth to the exploration of one's beliefs and perceptions. The question posed, "In this destination, is it possible to be Captivated?" suggests a longing for connection and wonderment amidst the uncertainties of life.
Overall, the poem invites the reader to reflect on their own beliefs, doubts, and the possibility of finding fascination and captivation in the midst of questioning and uncertainty.
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Re: Re. Captivated
24th Mar 2024 2:45am
Dear Louis,
I appreciate you breaking down what a few thoughts mean to you. There's a tender longing within. While feeling completely captivated, emotions are pulling at each other.
Uncertain in many ways, yet, exploring all the possibilities of love and its endless bliss.
Your in-depth analysis leaves me in awe.
I appreciate you breaking down what a few thoughts mean to you. There's a tender longing within. While feeling completely captivated, emotions are pulling at each other.
Uncertain in many ways, yet, exploring all the possibilities of love and its endless bliss.
Your in-depth analysis leaves me in awe.
Re: Re. Captivated
28th Mar 2024 6:44pm
Dear Brandy Nicole
Thank you immensely for your heartfelt words. It's truly touching to know that my thoughts resonated with you on such a profound level. Your eloquent expression of a "tender longing" amidst the captivating whirlwind of emotions beautifully encapsulates the essence of the human experience.
Your openness to uncertainty while embracing the vast spectrum of love's possibilities speaks volumes about your depth of understanding and appreciation for the complexities of the heart.
I'm genuinely humbled by your kind words regarding my analysis. It's a privilege to delve into the nuances of such profound sentiments, and I'm grateful for the opportunity to share in this exchange with you.
On another note, I would be delighted to connect with you on social media platforms like Facebook. If you're open to it, let's extend our conversation and continue to explore the wonders of life, love, and everything in between.
Looking forward to connecting further.
Warm regards,
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Re. Captivated
4th May 2024 2:30pm
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