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Submerged

I'm reading your poems
Hers too
Then back to yours
Wondering why I can't write like that ?
 
Collectively your poems are ravishing
All of you  
Submerged  
Kinetic  
Supercharged  
Intrinsic  
 
As an admirer  
My shaft rises than recesses
Only to rise again
Stimulated
Transcending desire
 
Lust is evermore  
I will curse the day that is gone
Time is on my Scorpio side
Poetry
Sensual
Erotic consumption
Written by PoetSpeak
Published
Author's Note
There are some good goddamn writers on this site.  One day I aspire to be one of them ..

Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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