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melancholies honor
honey colored reflection
blue gloss in sorrow
bringing the melancholy
cause she is free today
inside the ether roaming the sunflowers
picking her space in the shade
little girl of the valley
smiling coyly at the sun
sweet courage inside the bright day
gentle kindness in a smile
honesty touches the eyes
not so brightly it burns
turn down the honor
so it doesn't scorch the mortal
I lightly chastise myself
blue gloss in sorrow
bringing the melancholy
cause she is free today
inside the ether roaming the sunflowers
picking her space in the shade
little girl of the valley
smiling coyly at the sun
sweet courage inside the bright day
gentle kindness in a smile
honesty touches the eyes
not so brightly it burns
turn down the honor
so it doesn't scorch the mortal
I lightly chastise myself
Published 27th Jul 2023
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2023 1:01am
Hi CrimSin,
I particularly loved stanza 2.
Take care.
X
I particularly loved stanza 2.
Take care.
X
28th Jul 2023 2:46am
Anonymous
29th Jul 2023 4:03pm
My Pleasure.
Take care.
X
Take care.
X
27th Jul 2023 5:10pm
28th Jul 2023 2:47am
thank you graciously dearest poet you're very kind to say so I appreciate it deeply 💕
27th Jul 2023 7:09pm
A smile shared with a stranger is always something special. You just never know if it brings a bit of relief to the person who, maybe, just had a rotten day.......... Regards, Robert.
28th Jul 2023 2:48am
hello dearest Robert smiles at you hoping you're having a lovely evening and yes you're right good vibrations yes?
20th Aug 2023 6:43am
