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Asscrack braille before coffee
I woke up with
him pressed against
me, and I
arched until I could
read his veins
like asscrack
braille
his hand
rubbed small
circles on my
right hip
before dipping
below my waist
he growled
that I have
a magic
ass
He asked why
I don’t sleep naked
as he pushed
lacy boy shorts
down
and the
satin negligee up
he knows
he knows I like to
have them peeled off
he knows I like the
way sex has a preamble
that starts with my
body unveiled like
a gift
he rolled
me face down
on the bed,
and lightly slapped
the magic ass.
and
with his hand
wound
through my
hair,
my face in the pillow,
and my panties
caught on my ankle
he showed me
that type of
early morning magic
always requires
(flesh)
a willing
sacrifice
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Re. Before coffee
Anonymous
17th Jul 2023 5:31am
Masterful writing as always, but here's what comes to mind for now:: Asscrack Braille should be a college elective, and Magic Ass would be a great name for a band.
On a more serious note, I love everything you write.
On a more serious note, I love everything you write.
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Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 2:41pm
I have girl wood for you right now. My inner letch is drooling a bit. Band name. I had a running list of great band names for YEARS. I think Tattoo Raspberry Sherbet was my all time favorite.
But I disagree. I think Asscrack Braille is super punk. I can totally hear Greenday-esque-ness in their album.
Thanks sweets, you are the fucking best. I like your shit too!
Re: Re. Before coffee
18th Jul 2023 9:38am
Re. Before coffee
A visualisable picture of an early morning session you paint here. Favourite verses/lines:
he knows I like the
way sex has a preamble
that starts with my
body unveiled like
a gift [beautiful simile]
he showed me
that type of
early morning magic
always requires
(flesh) [the climax of the poem to me]
Regarding the subject of nightwear brought up, thought you may be interested to read this poem of mine:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/319716-couples-night-wear/
he knows I like the
way sex has a preamble
that starts with my
body unveiled like
a gift [beautiful simile]
he showed me
that type of
early morning magic
always requires
(flesh) [the climax of the poem to me]
Regarding the subject of nightwear brought up, thought you may be interested to read this poem of mine:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/319716-couples-night-wear/
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Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 2:45pm
Thanks SS. That was a fun piece, and I appreciate you thinking of to recommend it to me.
Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 2:45pm
Decaf? You come in my house and say shit like decaf?
(crosses self)
The fuck!
Thank you! I mean it
(crosses self)
The fuck!
Thank you! I mean it
Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 3:03pm
Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 3:04pm
You’re ri… (chokes)
You’re rrri (delicately gags)
You’re right.
(Shudders)
About my response. It’s like you know me.
Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 11:50am
Asscrack braille!! As far as magic goes, you are a magician of words.
I don't need my coffee this morning ( NOT,lol), your words were a jolt of pleasure to start my day. 💜
I don't need my coffee this morning ( NOT,lol), your words were a jolt of pleasure to start my day. 💜
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Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 2:47pm
Maybe I should rename the poem asscrack braille? It does seem to be the selling point.
D-bear, I love you so much and just want to give you a big squish for being so wonderful all of the time.
D-bear, I love you so much and just want to give you a big squish for being so wonderful all of the time.
Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 3:22pm
Thank you Betty, I'm having a really hard day and your hug feels good. I love u too for always making me smile.
Huge hug back!!!
Huge hug back!!!
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Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 12:11pm
I have to agree with the others on the asscrack braille!
This write was so incredibly sexy. Nothing beats early morning magic.
This write was so incredibly sexy. Nothing beats early morning magic.
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Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 2:48pm
Thank you beautiful! I actually had so many good vibes on it that I changed the title.
I love this though dig it. Thank you!
Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 2:43pm
Very good write. Thanks for starting my day with a good read and a smile.
Bat
Bat
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Re: Re. Before coffee
17th Jul 2023 2:49pm
Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
Well, I'm up now. Good morning.
Asscrack braille, what a fabulous mindset image. Another brilliant erotic write, Ms. Betty.
Asscrack braille, what a fabulous mindset image. Another brilliant erotic write, Ms. Betty.
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Re: Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
17th Jul 2023 5:40pm
Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
17th Jul 2023 7:55pm
I freaking love you.
Changing the title.
That's freaking kicks asscrack!!!!!
Changing the title.
That's freaking kicks asscrack!!!!!
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Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
18th Jul 2023 9:44am
There's a world of difference between tooting your own horn and presenting yourself.
Tooting is a tool to manipulate.
Presenting is an awaiting avalanche of intimacy and anticipation.
Your writing explores this difference often; thank you.
Intimacy is running at a premium.
Tooting is a tool to manipulate.
Presenting is an awaiting avalanche of intimacy and anticipation.
Your writing explores this difference often; thank you.
Intimacy is running at a premium.
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Re: Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
18th Jul 2023 3:45pm
Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
18th Jul 2023 4:09pm
Your beautiful mind is an exploration that never ever gets old. I know you tease when say you write 'porn' but that's not at all the gist of it, not by fucking far. For me, your writing really is the ultimate poetic depths of intimacy which you truthfully and gorgeously connect your readers to. Sexy, funny, raw and pure in all it's glorious revealing... And let me tell you, it's writing that always leaves me feeling simply breathless.
That magic ass isn't the only magic that you wield!! (although I'm sure it's fucking phenomenal!)
💙 - 🍑
Much love and much thanks for being here,
you sexy mf'r
-S
That magic ass isn't the only magic that you wield!! (although I'm sure it's fucking phenomenal!)
💙 - 🍑
Much love and much thanks for being here,
you sexy mf'r
-S
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Re: Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
18th Jul 2023 11:09pm
Right back at you, beautiful.
😍🫵🍑
Thank you for stellar feedback. I write shallow and feel deep and it’s fucking amazing when someone dips below the surface and gleans more. You make my day. You really do.
😍🫵🍑
Thank you for stellar feedback. I write shallow and feel deep and it’s fucking amazing when someone dips below the surface and gleans more. You make my day. You really do.
Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
19th Jul 2023 1:14am
don't think i've ever read a poem about asscrack braille before lol good stuff you are very talented
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Re: Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
19th Jul 2023 1:43am
Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
Hahaha, sex in and of itself is next level, but that early morning wake up to life. Mmmmm, that freaking jolt that clears the fog and life's rut is instantly filled. You're placed on a plain that only the two of you knows the language and can relate. You realize why in that moment without doubt, this isn't a burden, it's a gifted destiny. Tight work Lady
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Re: Re. Asscrack braille before coffee
18th Oct 2023 3:27am