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Secrets, Lies, and Truth... *Stay Quiet Sweetheart*
To cut but to keep
To know and to weep
Is there a difference in keeping the truth to myself
Or will the lies become of
I don't see a difference
But so many others do
All I can ask is
Please, please, don't let this be my last breath
To know and to weep
Is there a difference in keeping the truth to myself
Or will the lies become of
I don't see a difference
But so many others do
All I can ask is
Please, please, don't let this be my last breath
Published 18th Apr 2012
| Edited 29th May 2012
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19th Apr 2012 2:36pm
17th May 2012 6:51pm
19th Apr 2012 6:09pm
But you have a something but you rely to much on cliches but still deeper then dark ,I like that your style is dark (btw the darkness has more skill then saddness like shock and horror) well that's my cents take it or not but I read all of your poems so I taught it would be best if I told you beware of the cliche
19th Apr 2012 7:08pm
xD dont worry im not one of those people who freaks out about constructive criticism(: But could you possibly give me an example of a cliche xD I was kind of confused...I'm not teh smartest person out there (:
