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Void Of Self
My escape from prison during lucidity is eclipsed by my imprisonment through sleep. Anxiety is a warden who does not allow visitors. Obsessive compulsive disorder allows a window out of a jail not unlike Alcatraz. How does an inmate of an biological crime come up for parole when the synapses have no compassion?
Published 9th Jul 2023
Author's Note
It is about the burden of guilt
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9th Jul 2023 9:33pm
Anxiety is a warden that doesn't allow visitors cannot be any more TRUE. That was well worded.
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I've got my eye on you 😊
9th Jul 2023 9:43pm
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15th Jul 2023 4:59am
This can be taken in many different ways. You leave a lot of room for interpretation, despite hitting the nail on the head, in what you meant to express. That's a great attribute or skill to have as a writer. Anyway, your transition of insight builds upon basic understanding of typical life in abstract ways that culminate to unique work. I like the potential you have. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Thanks for sharing!
15th Jul 2023 8:58am
And you wrote it very well and again with some lines that I am JEALOUS of you for writing lol! And I know the ocd demon myself, even if that is not what you were really hitting at so much with this. I have no problem stating I have it. Hell, maybe in some twisted way it makes me a better poet. enjoyed!
15th Jul 2023 11:15am
You guys made my day with these comments. I appreciate your words more than you know.
