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Depth
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Depth
There’s no depth to words
Unless we can understand
The message behind
Written by
wallyroo92
Published
29th Jun 2023
| Edited
30th Jun 2023
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Competition
The Challenges of Poetry
Author's Note
I’ve never been good at Haikus
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#haiku
#wisdom
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Re. Depth
Anonymous
29th Jun 2023 9:59pm
Well this one is certainly an exception because it's a killer gut punch of perfect brevity, Walter.
No muss no fuss... stark no holds truth!
Loved this senryú, it's message is loud and clear.
Terrific work
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Re: Re. Depth
wallyroo92
30th Jun 2023 11:32pm
Being brief has never been my forte. I know haikus may be easy to write but having depth itself is a challenge.
Thank you
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Re. Depth
Ahavati
30th Jun 2023 1:37pm
Perception is key to vocabulary, for sure! Poignant, Wally.
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Re: Re. Depth
wallyroo92
30th Jun 2023 11:34pm
Thanks Ahavati. I appreciate it
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Re. Depth
robert43041
(Viking)
30th Jun 2023 2:08pm
Agreed. Some scirbers want to be soooooooooo smart their message is undecipherable.
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Re: Re. Depth
wallyroo92
1st Jul 2023 1:08am
Keeping it simple may have more weight.
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